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Mass media has significantly changed our cognitive pattern. This is very apparent in our daily lives and our surroundings today. It is strongly agreed that people’s ideology is massively influenced by TV, Radio & Newspaper. This will be proven by analysing boa these mediums have shaped people’s ideas about lifestyle and habits

Mass media has significantly changed our cognitive pattern. This is very apparent in our daily lives and our surroundings today. It is strongly agreed that people’s ideology is massively influenced by TV, Radio & Newspaper. This will be proven by analysing boa these mediums have shaped people’s ideas about lifestyle and habits GJ7De

To begin with, mass media constantly bombard people with adverts, world news, trends, and fashion etc. The viewers get captivated and try to imitate that. For instance, TV & newspapers often cover the lifestyle of celebrities in a jazzy manner and consequently most youngsters try to act, dress and talk like them. This example clearly show the influence of mass media is constantly changing our lifestyle and perceptions. Thus, mass media plays a great role in shaping one’s ideas.

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