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Stress is increased rapidly among all the ages of group. Discuss reason and solution.

Stress is increased rapidly among all the ages of group. Discuss reason and solution. nEDEE
An obstacle of horries and warries which was always disputable has now become more contended with many individuals affirm that it is blessings while other rationality this nation. The prominent influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. This essay will elaborate my views of favouring the the causes and solution impact of the trend in subsequent paragraphs. Analysing the statement and explaining further the primary reason behind this is that there are many families belongs to the middle class family and they face poverty problem so they do not achieve their goal and faces numerous pressure on mind. An additional striking rhythm and reason in this regard is that some persons are very hardworking in their work but they do not satisfied with their salary because company pay less income to their employees. This salary do not complete their desires and they feel anxiety. Probing ahead, main underlying solution stems from that practice that masses are very depressed about hustle and bustle then they are doing more exercise in daily routine. This exercise dimnishing all burden on the head. One another think, it is is partinent to mention that the main solution of decrease the over starch by the logical thinking. This logical think producer positive Vibes and feel wind down. To recapitulate, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that is reason of produce tension and solution of of decline the burden are indeed too great to ignore.
An obstacle of
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horries
and
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warries
which was always disputable has
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now
become more contended with
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many
individuals affirm that it is blessings while other rationality this nation. The prominent influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. This essay will elaborate my views of
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favouring
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the the
causes and
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solution
impact of the trend in subsequent paragraphs.
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Analysing
the statement and explaining
further
the primary reason behind this is that there are
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many
families belongs to the middle
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class
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
family and
they face poverty problem
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so
they do not achieve their goal and faces numerous pressure on mind. An additional striking rhythm and reason in this regard is that
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some
persons are
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very
hardworking in their work
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but
they do not
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satisfied
with their salary
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because
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company
pay less income to their employees. This salary do not complete their
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
desires and
they feel anxiety. Probing ahead, main underlying
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solution
stems from that practice that masses are
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very
depressed about hustle and bustle then they are doing more exercise in daily routine. This exercise
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dimnishing
all burden on the head. One another
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think
, it
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is is
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partinent
to mention that the main
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solution
of decrease the over starch by the logical thinking. This logical
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think
producer
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positive
Vibes and feel wind down. To recapitulate, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion
that is
reason of produce tension and
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solution
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of of
decline the burden are
indeed
too great to
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ignore
.
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IELTS essay Stress is increased rapidly among all the ages of group. Discuss reason and solution.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
252 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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