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Modern technology computer games playing

Modern technology computer games playing PEnEd

A large proportion of adults new enjoy playing computer games during their free time. In my opinion this is a result of development in mobile technology since computer games encourage passivity firstly nowadays youngsters mostly spend time playing computer games. now it is possible play games on laptop computer and smartphone it is very bad habits. some workers use the mobile phone on the work. in the other hand mobile phone is so many benefits. firstly income sources. people give the online jobs, online develiry we can income of house. secondly, mobile phone use on education. some students use the mobile phn and boost your mind. students improve our self confidence. then mobile phone entertainment source. we can watch the movies comandy show films and listen online songs

A large proportion of adults new enjoy playing computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 during their free time. In my opinion this is a result of development in mobile technology since computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 encourage passivity firstly
 nowadays youngsters mostly
 spend time playing computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterNow
now
 it is possible play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 on laptop computer and smartphone it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 habits. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSome
some
 workers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 on the work. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 the other hand mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 benefits. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFirstly
firstly
 income sources. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPeople
people
 give the online jobs, online Possible spelling mistake found.revelrydevilrydeviltry
develiry
 we The word 'income' is a noun or an adjective. A verb or adverb is missing or misspelled here, or maybe a comma is missing.
can income
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSecondly
secondly
, mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 on education. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSome
some
 students This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the mobile Possible spelling mistake found.fanftfunPhDpanpen
phn
 and boost your mind. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterStudents
students
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 our This word is normally spelled with hyphen.self-confidence
self confidence
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThen
then
 mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 entertainment source. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 the movies Possible spelling mistake found.companycommandcomedycommandsNormandycandy
comandy
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 films and listen online Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsongs.songs!songs?songs:songs,songs;
songs