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how to survive in the wild

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i remember that one time i lost in the deep forest and i'm really nervous. i'm afraid of i'll die. that's terrible. but i'm saved by rescue team. unbelievable. in my experience, when you face in case that you could keep a cold head and calm. then you should find water source and foot source such as fruit, vegetable or mushroom. the most importance i must find firewood to fire. it will avoid animal dangerrous like tiger, lion, bear. . . and it's a good idea to camp far water source which help you safer. at the end of the day, the patient, intellegent and brave would help survive in the wild. go for it and break a leg
i
remember that one time
i
lost in the deep forest and
i'm
really
nervous.
i'm
afraid of
i'll
die
.
that
's terrible.
but
i'm
saved by rescue team.
unbelievable
.
in
my experience, when you face in case that you could
keep
a
cold
head and calm.
then
you should find water source and foot source such as fruit, vegetable or mushroom.
the
most importance
i
must
find firewood to fire.
it
will avoid animal
dangerrous
like tiger, lion, bear.
.
.
and
it's a
good
idea
to camp far water source which
help
you safer.
at
the
end
of the day, the patient,
intellegent
and brave would
help
survive in the wild.
go
for it and break a
leg
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IELTS essay how to survive in the wild

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
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