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Story writing. Tina was very excited when she heard that she had won the prize.

Story writing. Tina was very excited when she heard that she had won the prize. kebyK

Tina was very excited when she heard that she had won the prize. She was athletic in running a marathon. She used to do sport when she was 6 years old. Although it wasn't with pleasure, she did it properly and work hard at her dad's request. That day the day began with sunny lights shining from the window. It refreshed me and drove me out of fatigue from yesterday's training. So she got up in a hurry and run into the bathroom. While having a bath I was thinking about the forthcoming competition. I was so excited that I couldn't eat anything. Generally, every day I used to have breakfast with many healthy foods: some bread with ham on thin cheese. Also, I prefer the boiling eggs and drinking freshly squeezed juice.

Tina was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited when she heard that she had won the prize. She was athletic in running a marathon. She This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to do sport when she was 6 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. Although it wasn't with pleasure, she did it properly
 and work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 at her dad's request. That day the day began with sunny lights shining from the window. It refreshed me and drove me out of fatigue from yesterday's training. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 up in a hurry and run into the bathroom. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 having a bath I was thinking about the forthcoming competition. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 excited that I couldn't eat anything. Generally
, every day I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to have breakfast with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 healthy foods: This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 bread with ham on thin cheese. Also
, I prefer the boiling eggs and drinking freshly
 squeezed juice. 