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story about men with nonsense matters

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The man walking on the road without any feeling at all, just like other people on the street. For a while, he decided to change the rotation because he didn't feel enthusiastic, so he turned to home where were approximately two blocks further. The House of the man was dirty like that, never cleaned for many years. There has been a great much irrelevant stuff on the surface of the room. Afterwards, the man has sat down on the sofa and started to think about what happened last night at the party. While the man has been thinking, the time is going slower every second. Something like to stop him when he tries to remember things, especially about that night. It was clear that night happened nothing important, so why he tried so much to remember. The reason for that paranoia is related to blocking thinking about this subject. When it comes to remember or think about it, as though someone or something hampered him.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
man
 walking on the road without any feeling at all, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 like other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 on the street. For a while, he decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the rotation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he didn't feel enthusiastic, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 he turned to home where were approximately two blocks further
.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
House
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
man
 was dirty like that, never cleaned for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 years. There has been a great much irrelevant stuff on the surface of the room. Afterwards, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
man
 has sat down on the sofa and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about what happened last night at the party. While the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
man
 has been thinking, the time is going slower every second. Something like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 him when he tries to remember things, especially
 about that night. It was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that night happened nothing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 why he tried This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much to remember. The reason for that paranoia is related
 to blocking thinking about this subject. When it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 to remember or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about it, as though someone or something hampered him. 