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statement of purpose for online program

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A teacher is not a profession; a teacher is a style of life. This statement reflects my desire for the continuous improvement. I am a teacher of English language in a private school where I work with different students, different levels and age groups. It is a great satisfaction to see how people change their lives by learning a new language: my students obtain different job positions, pass the tests\exams, travel, move to live abroad, present their companies at international conferences, etc. I consider that the initial aim of every teacher is to constantly improve teaching skills, which consequently help learners to achieve their personal goals. A successful teacher should never stop learning, because there is always room for improvement no matter how much experience you have. With this idea in mind, I am eager for learning something new, due to this I have already completed several courses. However, I feel that the possibility to receive a training from well-known American universities will increase my chances to be even a better teacher and provide my learners with the best practice. I believe my past and current experiences have prepared me tremendously to serve as a teacher trainer and now I am moving into the direction of becoming an in-service trainer for my company. The course on Professional Development for teacher trainers would be a great opportunity to gain the necessary knowledge and will be a good starting point. Since we all moved into online teaching, I have started thinking about different ways to encourage, motivate and support learners to learn. The idea of creating an online course which will be supplementary to the main one has always been on my mind. I believe that the Creating and Implementing Online Course will help me better understand the
A
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teacher
is not a profession; a
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teacher
is a style of life. This statement reflects my desire for the continuous improvement. I am a
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teacher
of English language in a private school where I work with
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different
students,
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different
levels and age groups. It is a great satisfaction to
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see
how
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people
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change
their
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lives
by learning a new language: my students obtain
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different
job positions, pass the
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tests
\exams, travel,
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move
to
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live
abroad, present their
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companies
at international conferences, etc.

I consider that the initial aim of every
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teacher
is to
constantly
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improve
teaching
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skills
, which
consequently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
learners to achieve their personal goals. A successful
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teacher
should never
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stop
learning,
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because
there is always room for improvement no matter how much experience you have. With this
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idea
in mind, I am eager for learning something new, due to this I have already completed several
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courses
.
However
, I feel that the possibility to receive a training from well-known American universities will increase my chances to be even a better
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
and provide my learners with the best practice.

I believe my past and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
experiences have prepared me
tremendously
to serve as a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
trainer and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
I am moving into the direction of becoming an in-service trainer for my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
on Professional Development for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
trainers would be a great opportunity to gain the necessary knowledge and will be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
starting point.

Since we all
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
into online teaching, I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
thinking about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
ways to encourage, motivate and support learners to learn. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
of creating an online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
which will be supplementary to the main one has always been on my mind. I believe that the Creating and Implementing Online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Course
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me better understand
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the
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IELTS essay statement of purpose for online program

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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