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Here is the first time that I write my diary by english

Here is the first time that I write my diary by english 30y0b
Well, Here is the first time that I write my diary by english. I haven't ever intended to write about it since I was born in 2003. I thought that thing was never happened because it's very difficult for me and I will have to write, think, read, speak everything fully by english. Fortunately, I realized that English is not only the language to communicate with friends all around the world but also the tool to access with the modern global society. To talk about the benefits of learning English is endless, so I will start writing my individual diary on 18/10/2021. First is the morning, I wake up at about 6 however I usually go out of the bed at nine then I brush my teeth, wash my face and can also take a shower. Next, I have breakfast before going back my room for studying. Yeah, today is the first day of week, so I definitely prepare assignment for lessons tomorrow.
Well, Here is the
first
time that I write my diary by
english
. I haven't ever intended to write about it since I
was born
in 2003. I
thought
that thing was never happened
because
it's
very
difficult for me and I will
have to
write,
think
, read, speak everything
fully
by
english
.
Fortunately
, I realized that English is not
only
the language to communicate with friends all around the world
but
also
the tool to access with the modern global society. To talk about the benefits of learning English is endless,
so
I will
start
writing my individual diary on 18/10/2021.
First
is the morning, I wake up at about 6
however
I
usually
go out of the bed at nine then I brush my teeth, wash my face and can
also
take a shower.
Next
, I have breakfast
before
going back my room for studying. Yeah,
today
is the
first
day of week,
so
I definitely prepare assignment for lessons tomorrow.
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IELTS essay Here is the first time that I write my diary by english

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
163 words
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