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Here is the first time that I write my diary by english

Here is the first time that I write my diary by english 30y0b

Well, Here is the first time that I write my diary by english. I haven't ever intended to write about it since I was born in 2003. I thought that thing was never happened because it's very difficult for me and I will have to write, think, read, speak everything fully by english. Fortunately, I realized that English is not only the language to communicate with friends all around the world but also the tool to access with the modern global society. To talk about the benefits of learning English is endless, so I will start writing my individual diary on 18/10/2021. First is the morning, I wake up at about 6 however I usually go out of the bed at nine then I brush my teeth, wash my face and can also take a shower. Next, I have breakfast before going back my room for studying. Yeah, today is the first day of week, so I definitely prepare assignment for lessons tomorrow.

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