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Sport - physical or mental strength

Sport - physical or mental strength 0B3Y3
Many people argue about the influence of either physical, or mental strength in sport. It's quite difficult to characterize any of them, since they are not strict definitions, and others can imagine other meanings underneath them. Let me start with the physical strength. It has become a cliché that a successful sportsman needs to be in flawless physical shape. Even young boys in kindergarten play games where they measure their muscles to determine who has the biggest chance of becoming an athlete. Partly, it's definitely true. However, it's not only the body shape and size that matter - it's actually sustainability. Sport is both about quantity and quality of the exercise. It isn't important to do something for a little while and then give up on it. It's the years of training that make one perfect in a certain field. A lot of ball games require player to not only be able to run, but also to think straight and use logic. This falls under the mental type of strength. This includes reflexes and predictability skill as well. Certain sports, such as tennis, require not only all of the abovementioned characteristics, but also the ability to adapt to the game. There also other types of sports that not necessarily need the physical aspects of the body to be met. For example, chess is usually considered to be a sport for the brain. In conclusion, sport consists of a variety of disciplines. It is impossible to put them into one sack and find qualities that would match all of them. To be successful in any of them, both aspects of strength are significant and irreplaceable.
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, or mental
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strength
in
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sport
.
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and others
can imagine other meanings underneath them.

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with the
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physical
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strength
. It has become a cliché that a successful sportsman needs to be in flawless
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physical
shape. Even young boys in kindergarten play games where they measure their muscles to determine who has the biggest chance of becoming an athlete. Partly,
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it's
definitely true.

However
,
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not
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only
the body shape and size that matter
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actually sustainability.
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Sport
is both about quantity and quality of the exercise. It isn't
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important
to do something for a
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while and then give up on it.
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the years of training that
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make
one perfect in a certain field.

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ball games require player to not
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be able to run,
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also
to
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straight and
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logic. This falls under the mental type of
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strength
. This includes reflexes and predictability
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skill
as well
. Certain
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sports
, such as tennis, require not
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only
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all of the
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abovementioned
characteristics,
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also
the ability to adapt to the game. There
also
other types of
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sports
that not
necessarily
need the
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physical
aspects of the body to
be met
.
For example
, chess is
usually
considered to be a
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sport
for the brain.

In conclusion
,
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sport
consists of a variety of disciplines. It is impossible to put them into one sack and find qualities that would match all of them. To be successful in any of them, both aspects of
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strength
are significant and irreplaceable.
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IELTS essay Sport - physical or mental strength

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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