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Sport is important in our life

Sport is important in our life gbWRO
A key role is a played by sport in our life. I absolutely agree with this statement because of several reasons. The main reason behind my point of view is that it makes us forget our problems. For instance, it unwinds our minds. It is due to the fact that sport is a good stress killer. Hence, it improves blood circulation. The other reason why I agree with this opinion is that it boasts brain productivity. A clear example to illustrate this is that it enhances us physically. The prime reason of it is that sport unites people under one umbrella. That is why, team sport encourage teamwork. In conclusion, it is clear that it makes our muscles move and it keeps us in fit.
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IELTS essay Sport is important in our life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
125 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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