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Species of birds observed in Woodchuck country depending by season

Species of birds observed in Woodchuck country depending by season 536AQ
In winter, four species bird can see in Woodchuck country. These birds: cardinals, crows, juncos. Of them juncos flys in this country only winter. In wintertime observed less birds than summer. There is three views birds more in summer than winter. Others three variations of birds live here both- winter and summer. These birds: cardinals, crows and woodpeckers. Juncos is could see here in winter but it is impossible to see this bird in this town in summer. Four species of eight fly here in only one season. For example, junter in winter and bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles, vireos. In summer 7 of 8 views is living in this place. These birds: bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles, vireos, cardinals, crows and woodfpeckers. 4 of them are fly in town in summertime. Others stay regardless of the season. People can see a bluebird in Woodchuck country only summer, respectively bluebirds will be leave this country in winter.
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, four species
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in Woodchuck
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country
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: cardinals, crows, juncos. Of them juncos
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flys
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only
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. In wintertime observed
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less
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birds
than
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summer
.
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There is three views
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birds
more in
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summer
than winter.

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birds
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here both-
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and
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summer
. These
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birds
: cardinals, crows and woodpeckers. Juncos
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in this town in
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and bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles, vireos.

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7 of 8 views is living in this place. These
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: bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles, vireos, cardinals, crows and
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woodfpeckers
. 4 of them are
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in town in
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summertime
. Others stay regardless of the season.
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People
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a bluebird in Woodchuck
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country
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summer
,
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IELTS essay Species of birds observed in Woodchuck country depending by season

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153 words
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