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Speaking about myself and my leisure time when I stay at home

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often surf Facebook's news by smartphone because I want to know exactly some information about covid 19 and follow my friend’s life on social media. May I ask what is the starting time of the tour to HongKong island? I have to study on the internet every day. However, I usually watch movies when I have leisure time. Totally, yes because I can do some good habits. For example, I usually enjoy healthy food and it is great for my general well-being. I want to make sure I understand you perfectly. So could you say that one more again?
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often
surf Facebook's news by smartphone
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because
I want to know exactly
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some
information about
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid 19
and follow my friend’s life on social media.

May I ask what is the starting time of the tour to
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HongKong
island?

I
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have to
study on the internet every day.
However
, I
usually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
movies when I have leisure time.

Totally
, yes
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because
I can do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
habits.
For example
, I
usually
enjoy healthy food and it is great for my general well-being.

I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure I understand you
perfectly
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
could you say that one more again?
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IELTS essay Speaking about myself and my leisure time when I stay at home

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
99 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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