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Speacial hotel that you visited.

Speacial hotel that you visited. paqn2
I am travel freak person so i used to go diffrent places due to this i visited palethora of hotels which was quite good and also some was bad. Here i would like to talk about a hotel which is super special for me. Actually it was about 5 months ago when o got a invitation card of my cousin's marriage as i readed the card i knew the the marriage palac is in japur. I became excited to visit this palace. I went to hotel 2 days prior of wedding because there are few rituals which were performed before wedding. As i arrived in hotel i was fully impresed nu facade of the royal hotel and the sweet that was given to us was significant and the round bed in room were fully impresed me. Moreover, the food was very delecious becaus several types of speacial specis were using in the food. Further more, the wedding was ate night so the decoration was amazing the lighting and all things looks beautiful. So that was the hotel which is very speacial to me
I am travel freak person
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visited
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hotel
which is super special for me. Actually it was about 5 months ago when o
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invitation card of my cousin's marriage as i
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the card
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knew
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marriage
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palac
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japur
. I became excited to visit this palace. I went to
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2 days prior of wedding
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were performed
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wedding. As
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arrived in
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hotel
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was
fully
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and the sweet that was
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, the food was
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delecious
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several types of
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speacial
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night
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IELTS essay Speacial hotel that you visited.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
182 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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