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In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping

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" In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. " I going to analyze the true and false of this opinion. I have never been in the future and I can only guess about that. The above thought may be correct. In the future, almost all people in the world use online shopping services. That is, they buy everything what they need, without learning the house. They don't buy anything when they go supermarkets. And, if people go shopping centres, they will just entertainment. Because there are playing stations, cafes, theatres and a lot of interesting places in there. The above opinion may be incorrect. The following years people will prefer buy products from markets. They will go supermarkets and bought everything what they need. People can bargain and pay freely. They select and compare things. May be they enjoy that. So, there are advanteges and disadvanteges to shopping online and going to the market.
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"
In the future, the main reason for going to the
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shopping
mall will be for entertainment, not to shop.
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"
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I going
to analyze the true and false of this opinion. I have never been in the future and I can
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only
guess about that. The above
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thought
may be correct. In the future, almost all
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people
in the world
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use
online
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shopping
services.
That is
, they
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buy
everything what they need, without learning the
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house
. They don't
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buy
anything when they go supermarkets. And, if
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people
go
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shopping
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centres
, they will
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just
entertainment.
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Because
there are playing stations,
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cafes
,
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theatres
and
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a lot of
interesting places in there. The above opinion may be incorrect. The following years
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people
will prefer
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buy
products from markets. They will go supermarkets and
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bought
everything what they need.
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People
can bargain and pay
freely
. They select and compare things.
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May be
they enjoy that.
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So
, there are
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advanteges
and
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disadvanteges
to
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shopping
online and going to the market.
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IELTS essay In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
166 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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