Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What is your opinion? v.2
Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What is your opinion? v. 2
In the modern world, many people are willing to explore the space in form to colonise or search for other planets. However, others feel that the government should subsidise other projects rather than these activities, as they are not beneficial for the human kind or other areas such as education and health care are more essential than researching the outer area. Personally, I believe that the authorities should pay attention to the other planets in order to collect the information for the ordinary people.
On the one hand, it is true that humankind cannot live on the Earth in the future, as its atmosphere is polluted. In this reason, many people are reckoned to think that such kinds of researchers are beneficial for the society. Moreover, the Earth cannot provide the food and material resources, as the population is growing. To illustrate, 1 billion people are born in the last decade. As a result, the planet is suffering from overpopulation.
On the other hand, it is clear that many people are keen to think that the government should spend the budget for its citizens, as they should receive the education, health service and food resources. Moreover, they tend to think that cosmos exploration is too expensive and not profitable. In this regard, many people believe that the authorities should not hold the research of outer space. However, the private companies can solve this problem. For example, a SPACE X company is exploring the Mars in order to send a manned space flight.
In conclusion, although many people believe that such kinds of activities are not beneficial for the people, personally, I believe that government should fund such kinds of researches in order to provide the information for the ordinary people. In addition, the solar system should be learned because it is vital for the next generation.
In the modern world,
many
people
are willing to explore the
space
in form to
colonise
or search for
other
planets.
However
, others feel that the
government
should
subsidise
other
projects
rather
than these activities, as they are not beneficial for the human
kind
or
other
areas such as education and health care are more essential than researching the outer area.
Personally
, I
believe
that the authorities should pay attention to the
other
planets in order to collect the information for the ordinary
people
.
On the one hand, it is true that humankind cannot
live
on the Earth in the future, as its atmosphere
is polluted
. In this reason,
many
people
are reckoned
to
think
that such
kinds
of researchers are beneficial for the society.
Moreover
, the Earth cannot provide the food and material resources, as the population is growing. To illustrate, 1 billion
people
are born
in the last decade.
As a result
, the planet is suffering from overpopulation.
On the
other
hand, it is
clear
that
many
people
are keen to
think
that the
government
should spend the budget for its citizens, as they should receive the education, health service and food resources.
Moreover
, they tend to
think
that cosmos exploration is too expensive and not profitable. In this regard,
many
people
believe
that the authorities should not hold the research of outer
space
.
However
, the private
companies
can solve this problem.
For example
, a
SPACE X
company
is exploring the Mars in order to
send
a manned
space
flight.
In conclusion
, although
many
people
believe
that such
kinds
of activities are not beneficial for the
people
,
personally
, I
believe
that
government
should fund such
kinds
of researches in order to provide the information for the ordinary
people
.
In addition
, the solar system should
be learned
because
it is vital for the
next
generation.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes