Tax payers allocate money enormously to fund celestial exploration. Although this occurrence brings benefit such as obtaining the most recent research equipments, I believe that its drawback such as uncertainty result can be considered.
It is argued that funding space research means supporting scientists to acquire such some sophisticated research means. This is because tax provides granted endowment which enables high - cost tools of research affordable to purchase. As an illustration, in 2016, Unitary Republic of Indonesia shared 35% higher budget addressed to space exploration. As the result of this, LIPI - the national institution for space science development, bought more and more machines and cut- edge research equipments in that year. In addition, because of this budgeting, they could purchase the latest russians satellite space station which was unaffordable to purchase in the prior budgeting.
On the other hand, draining revenue on space research is like supporting virtually nothing. This comes with some reasons. Firstly, yields of this study often have nothing to do with daily life, they have less effects to societies. However, it is different when the tax budget is contributed to facilities and public services which its implications affect more to tax payers in every days. Secondly, the process of exploration and experiments takes a long period of time because the research and the experiments are often failed for many times.
In conclusion, I believe that this phenomenon has negative side such as indefinite achievements, while its positive side such as helping researchers to attain advanced research amenities can be considered. 
 Tax
 payers allocate money  
enormously
 to fund celestial exploration. Although this occurrence brings benefit such as obtaining the most recent  
research
 equipments, I believe that its drawback such as uncertainty result can  
be considered
.
It  
is argued
 that funding  
space
  research
 means supporting scientists to acquire such  
some
 sophisticated  
research
 means. This is  
because
  tax
 provides granted endowment which enables high  
-
 cost tools of  
research
 affordable to  
purchase
. As an illustration, in 2016, Unitary Republic of Indonesia shared 35% higher budget addressed to  
space
 exploration. As the result of this,  
LIPI
  -
 the national institution for  
space
 science development,  
bought
 more and more machines and  
cut
- edge  
research
 equipments in that year.  
In addition
,  
because of this
 budgeting, they could  
purchase
 the latest  
russians
 satellite  
space
 station which was unaffordable to  
purchase
 in the prior budgeting. 
On the other hand
, draining revenue on  
space
  research
 is like supporting  
virtually
 nothing. This  
comes
 with  
some
 reasons.  
Firstly
, yields of this study  
often
 have nothing to do with daily life, they have  
less
 effects to societies.  
However
, it is  
different
 when the  
tax
 budget  
is contributed
 to facilities and public services which its implications  
affect
 more to  
tax
 payers in every  
days
.  
Secondly
, the process of exploration and experiments takes a long period of time  
because
 the  
research
 and the experiments are  
often
 failed for  
many
 times. 
In conclusion
, I believe that this phenomenon has  
negative
 side such as indefinite achievements, while its  
positive
 side such as helping researchers to attain advanced  
research
 amenities can  
be considered
. 
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