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Statement of Purpose I, RAFSAN JAMIL PAVEL, applying to London South Bank University for admission to the undergraduate program in Electrical and Electronic Engineering. I completed my SSC(Secondary School Certificate) and HSC(Higher School Certificate) from Science background and achieved a GPA of 5. 00 in both SSC and HSC respectively in the year 2018 and 2020. I have always had a creative ability and a fascination with how things work. The challenge of solving practical problems inherent in the field of engineering appeals directly to these traits. Looking back through my school and college days, laid the foundations required for education in me. Mathematics and Science truly enchanted me because they governed everything around me. The natural things that happen daily in our life are relatable to Science, especially Physics. Physics interprets the fundamentals of Science and my favorite so far and it’s so much related to Electrical and Electronic Engineering. Participation in inter-school competitions in quizzes, essay writing, science projects, and many individual and group competitions always demanded an innovative perspective. During those years, a gift from my mother, a remote-controlled car, and some other electronic toys fascinated me to no end. The power of steering a car from a distance was just amazing. After some days, I could find out the reason, just because of the blessing of Electronics. I could observe the television I see, I see the light, I see the mobile I speak into, the music system I listen to, are all the harvest of electronics. The basic interest led me to take up Mathematics, Physics, and Chemistry as my major subjects in high school. As a part of my Physics project, I had constructed logic gates and some ideas of the future world based on digital electronics and did some latches by using circuit elements. I was so astounded by the amazement of Electrical and Electronic things. Moreover, I always enjoyed long hours in my college. It allowed me to concentrate theory on the practical phenomenon. This in turn gave me a better understanding of the subjects. I always enjoyed my lab, my practical work happened in the lab and the way all things work scientifically. I took part in many science fairs and projects and did well on those events. I am particularly interested in Electrical and Electronic Engineering (EEE) because it is such a rapidly evolving discipline. The potential to integrate new technologies into real-life applications and the opportunity to develop practical skills in this sphere is exciting. In my leisure time, I read books and I play netball where good teamwork is essential. I enjoy watching talks about scientific inventions and I keep up to date with magazines that cover current and future trends in technology. I would apply my thoughts, opinions, skills and will do my best in the EEE field. I have a lot of interest in microprocessors and I have a dormant wish to work on this in the future in the field of Electrical and Electronic Engineering. I spent a week within the Electronics Department during my college days and was shown the diversity of the work they undertake. What most enthused me was the freedom the engineers have to use their creativity to solve problems. I observed designing my experiments and using their design skills to build circuits to achieve this. I desire that I apply to your esteemed university with distinguished faculty and alumni. London South Bank University’s research interests match mine. I hope that the faculty will expose me to the frontiers of the latest technologies and widen my mental horizons. London South Bank University is one of the best and unique in the world and this university is a confluence of people from many cultures, nationalities, and ideologies. Moreover, I choose the UK for higher education because it has an impressive international reputation, and studying in the UK develops excellent language skills. The English language is one of the most crucial importance nowadays. The cultural diversity of life in British higher education is unrivaled which made me interested in studying in the UK. I am sure that my exposure to these kinds of diverse influences would aid in the overall development of my personality and help me broaden my concept from the narrower confines of nationalism and internationalism. Also with some of the best brains around, it would be inspiring me to bring the best out of myself. I believe it is important that an engineer has a wider understanding of the social, political, and economic issues to better appreciate the context in which engineering impacts the community it serves. EEE impacts almost every aspect of our lives today and will only grow in importance. I want to be part of our technological future and make a positive contribution to future developments. RAFSAN JAMIL PAVEL Bangladesh.
Statement of Purpose

I,
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RAFSAN
JAMIL PAVEL, applying to London South Bank
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University
for admission to the undergraduate program in
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Electrical
and
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Electronic
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Engineering
. I completed my SSC(Secondary
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School
Certificate) and HSC(Higher
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School
Certificate) from
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Science
background and achieved a GPA of 5. 00 in both SSC and HSC
respectively
in the year 2018 and 2020.

I have always had a creative ability and a fascination with how things
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work
. The challenge of solving
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practical
problems inherent in the field of
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engineering
appeals
directly
to these traits. Looking back through my
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school
and college days, laid the foundations required for education in me. Mathematics and
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Science
truly
enchanted me
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because
they governed everything around me. The natural things that happen daily in our life are relatable to
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Science
,
especially
Physics. Physics interprets the fundamentals of
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Science
and my favorite
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so
far and it’s
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so
much related to
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Electrical
and
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Electronic
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Engineering
. Participation in inter-school competitions in quizzes, essay writing,
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science
projects, and
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many
individual and group competitions always demanded an innovative perspective. During those years, a gift from my mother, a remote-controlled car, and
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some
other
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electronic
toys fascinated me to no
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end
. The power of steering a car from a distance was
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just
amazing. After
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some
days, I could find out the reason,
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just
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because
of the blessing of Electronics. I could observe the television I
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see
, I
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see
the light, I
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see
the mobile I speak into, the music system I listen to, are all the harvest of electronics. The basic interest led me to take up Mathematics, Physics, and Chemistry as my major subjects in high
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school
. As a part of my Physics project, I had constructed logic gates and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
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ideas
of the
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future
world based on digital electronics and did
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some
latches by using circuit elements. I was
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so
astounded by the amazement of
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Electrical
and
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Electronic
things.
Moreover
, I always enjoyed long hours in my college. It
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allowed
me to concentrate theory on the
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practical
phenomenon. This in turn gave me a better understanding of the subjects. I always enjoyed my lab, my
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practical
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work
happened in the lab and the way all things
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work
scientifically
. I
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took part
in
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many
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science
fairs and projects and did well on those
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events
.
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I
am
particularly
interested in
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Electrical
and
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Electronic
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Engineering
(EEE)
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because
it is such a
rapidly
evolving discipline. The potential to integrate new technologies into real-life applications and the opportunity to develop
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practical
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skills
in this sphere is exciting. In my leisure time, I read books and I play netball where
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
teamwork is essential. I enjoy watching talks about scientific inventions and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
up to date with magazines that cover
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current
and
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future
trends in technology. I would apply my thoughts, opinions,
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skills
and will do my
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best
in the EEE field.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have
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a lot of
interest in microprocessors and I have a dormant wish to
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work
on this in the
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future
in the field of
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Electrical
and
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Electronic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Engineering
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
spent a week within the Electronics Department during my college days and
was shown
the diversity of the
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work
they undertake. What most enthused me was the freedom the engineers
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have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
their creativity to solve problems. I observed designing my experiments and using their design
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skills
to build circuits to achieve this.

I desire that I apply to your esteemed
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university
with distinguished faculty and alumni. London South Bank
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University’s
research interests match mine. I hope that the faculty will expose me to the frontiers of the latest technologies and widen my mental horizons. London South Bank
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University
is one of the
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best
and unique in the world and this
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university
is a confluence of
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people
from
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many
cultures, nationalities, and ideologies.
Moreover
, I choose the UK for higher education
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because
it has an impressive international reputation, and studying in the UK develops excellent language
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skills
. The English language is one of the most crucial importance nowadays. The cultural diversity of life in British higher education
is unrivaled
which made me interested in studying in the UK. I am sure that my exposure to these kinds of diverse influences would aid in the
overall
development of my personality and
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help
me broaden my concept from the narrower confines of nationalism and internationalism.
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with
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some
of the
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best
brains around, it would be inspiring me to bring the
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best
out of myself. I believe it is
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important
that an engineer has a wider understanding of the social, political, and economic issues to better appreciate the context in which
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engineering
impacts the community it serves. EEE impacts almost every aspect of our
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lives
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today
and will
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only
grow in importance. I want to be part of our technological
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future
and
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make
a
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positive
contribution to
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future
developments.

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IELTS essay sop format for undergraduate students

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
803 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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