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Write a paragraph about transport in your own city or town. Make sure you include comparisons between different transport methods.

Write a paragraph about transport in your own city or town. Make sure you include comparisons between different transport methods. 6NX9B
Transportation in my city: Cúcuta My city has conventional means of transport such as taxis, buses and Uber, we do not have mass transport; such as metro, tram or transmilenio, since it is a small city with little vehicular traffic. Buses are a very affordable and good means of transportation in Cúcuta. Although it is sometimes difficult to find more information about where exactly each bus goes, you will not find any city area that is not connected to the bus line. The bus service is the cheapest, therefore, this is still the option for many people. Taxis are very popular in Cúcuta as they form an essential part of public transportation. They are a fairly safe, fast and affordable alternative. Uber are like taxis, a very popular way of getting around in Cúcuta, sometimes there are cheaper taxis than normal ones but sometimes also more expensive. The question of whether Uber is legal in Colombia is not clearly defined as in many other countries. In conclusion, the taxi service is the safest, the Uber service is the most comfortable, and the bus service is the cheapest in the city.
Transportation in my city:
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Cúcuta


My city has conventional means of transport such as
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taxis
, buses and Uber, we do not have mass transport; such as metro, tram or
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transmilenio
, since it is a
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small
city with
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little
vehicular traffic.

Buses are a
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very
affordable and
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good
means of transportation in
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Cúcuta
. Although it is
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sometimes
difficult to find more information about where exactly each bus goes, you will not find any city area
that is
not connected to the bus line. The bus
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service
is the cheapest,
therefore
, this is
still
the option for
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many
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people
.

Taxis are
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very
popular in
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Cúcuta
as they form an essential part of public transportation. They are a
fairly
safe,
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fast
and affordable alternative.

Uber are like
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taxis
, a
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very
popular way of getting around in
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Cúcuta
,
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sometimes
there are cheaper
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taxis
than normal ones
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but
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sometimes
also
more expensive.
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The question of whether
Uber is legal in Colombia is not
clearly
defined as in
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many
other countries.

In conclusion
, the
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taxi
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service
is the safest, the Uber
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service
is the most comfortable, and the bus
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service
is the cheapest in the city.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph about transport in your own city or town. Make sure you include comparisons between different transport methods.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
190 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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