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“Sometimes it is better to be dishonest. ” Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v.1

“Sometimes it is better to be dishonest. ” Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 1
In competitive era, an advertisement has become virtual sources to introducing the upcoming product. Some people argue that it brings a negative effect impact on children, parents and market, while others and I believe that it have, the more benefits compared to the drawback as it has created employment and awareness. On one hand, it's attracting people more impulsive buying by providing different promotional offers that is why instead of saving money might be spent on purchasing unnecessary goods. For example, in the season of big billion days on Flipkart which has continuously given on a large number of discounts on the varied things which is why people would purchase the unusual things. Consequently people are misguided and cheated by search marketing tricks. Moreover, it only highlights of positive characteristic of the products and tries to hide its negative impact. However, I strongly supported that an advertisement has brought revolution in marketing strategies, it is an effective way of spreading of awareness and creating an employment among people about the use of new and existing products. For instance, Patanjali, world largest herbal product company, has introduced organic products which are healthier for human beings. Furthermore, an advertising help in educating the society about various health and safety issues, it is the best way to rise the demanding of the product. To conclude, an advertising have more benefits compared to the negative impact in terms of job creation, awareness, more choices, although sometimes people might be cheated by the lucrative profile of higher status brand.
In competitive era, an advertisement has become virtual sources to introducing the upcoming
product
.
Some
people
argue that it brings a
negative
effect impact on children, parents and market, while others and I believe that it have, the more benefits compared to the drawback as it has created employment and awareness.

On one hand, it's attracting
people
more impulsive buying by providing
different
promotional offers
that is
why
instead
of saving money might
be spent
on purchasing unnecessary
goods
.
For example
, in the season of
big
billion days on Flipkart which has
continuously
given
on
a large number of
discounts on the varied things which is why
people
would
purchase
the unusual things.
Consequently
people
are misguided
and cheated by search marketing tricks.

Moreover
, it
only
highlights of
positive
characteristic of the
products
and tries to
hide
its
negative
impact.

However
, I
strongly
supported that an advertisement has brought revolution in marketing strategies, it is an effective way of spreading of awareness and creating an employment among
people
about the
use
of new and existing
products
.
For instance
, Patanjali, world largest herbal
product
company
, has introduced organic
products
which are healthier for human beings.
Furthermore
, an advertising
help
in educating the society about various health and safety issues, it is the best way to rise the demanding of the product.

To conclude
, an advertising have more benefits compared to the
negative
impact in terms of job creation, awareness, more choices, although
sometimes
people
might
be cheated
by the lucrative profile of higher status brand.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay “Sometimes it is better to be dishonest. ” Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
254 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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