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Something healthy you enjoy doing.

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Pre-Covid-19, we had lived in peaceful lives. In the lockdown time, we are not allowed to go out apart from permission. Students can’t go to school. So, I have many leisuretime. I start to cook for my family and learn about eating heathy. I believe this activity can benefit both my mental health and my family physical health. I usually try to cook as often as possible for all of my family meals including breakfast, lunch and dinner. What I mean by healthy diet is a meal with a variety of foods that give the required nutrients we need. The reason why I enjoy eating healthy is I want my family relationship become more positive and Improve Family Wellness. There are ways I do easily improve my family’s nutrition. I control the food supply line. Allow family members to choose what to eat. Involve family members in make meal. Eat more vegetable and fruits.
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in peaceful
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. In the lockdown time, we are not
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to go out apart from permission. Students can’t go to school.
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, I have
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many
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leisuretime
. I
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start
to cook for my
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family
and learn about eating
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heathy
. I believe this activity can benefit both my mental health and my
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physical health.
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I
usually
try to cook as
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as possible for all of my
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family
meals including breakfast, lunch and dinner. What I mean by healthy diet is a meal with a variety of foods that give the required nutrients we need. The reason why I enjoy eating healthy is I want my
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family
relationship become more
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positive
and
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Improve
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Family
Wellness. There are ways I do
easily
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improve
my
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family’s
nutrition. I control the food supply line.
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Allow
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family
members to choose what to eat. Involve
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family
members in
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meal. Eat more vegetable and fruits.
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IELTS essay Something healthy you enjoy doing.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
154 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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