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essay for scholarship or kth

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I should be nominated for this scholarship because I am a hard-working and dedicated student. I have always dreamt of leaving a sustainable world for my kids and grandkids. I believe that this university would be best able to help me in realising this dream of mine. This scholarship, as well as your trust in me, will go a long way in helping me take my first step in the right direction. Thank you for considering me for this scholarship.

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IELTS essay essay for scholarship or kth

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

80 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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