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Somepeoplethinkthatmuseumsandartgalleriesshouldconcentrateontheworksoftheirowncountriesinsteadoftheworksofartfrom otherpartsoftheworld.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree.

Somepeoplethinkthatmuseumsandartgalleriesshouldconcentrateontheworksoftheirowncountriesinsteadoftheworksofartfrom otherpartsoftheworld. Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree. 6xaDB
It is certain that, health related problem is increasing day by day in the world. In some nation's the average weight person is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are denied I will discuss about causes of problem and how to solve issue in forthcoming paragraphs. To begin with, there are many causes of this problem firstandforemost, nowadays, most people are totally change their life style is the main reason they can prefer eating fast food which is easily available in market but it is tasty food and it is not hygienic food there are many diseases issue create such as blood pressure, heart beat are soon. Nextly, they avoid a home made food and most people is more seating at work in office. Furthermore, yougsters weight is increasing there is no excuse in our body and can feel that unhealthy. For instance, a person is from used for vehicles and not used to own foot. On the other side, there are ample ways to solve the problem every person should duty to avoid from restaurants food. And more time prefer eating to home made food. It's a hygienic food however, person is eating this food healthily life style in our country. Furthermore, the person is more and more excise joined in their life. After, eating a special diet such as meat, fish are adding on our diet. moreover, the government arrange health related awareness camp start in our cities because of, person is say and health more knowledge about them. Before wrapping it up, itwould be noexaggeration to state that various factors led this ugly growth but it is a not hard but to crack however, the joint efforts of parents and school is mandatory to uproot get ride from society.
It is certain that,
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health
related
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is increasing day by day in the world. In
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the average weight
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person
is increasing and their levels of
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health
and fitness
are denied
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discuss about causes
of
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and how to solve issue in forthcoming paragraphs.

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style is the main reason they can prefer
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which is
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it is tasty
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and it is not hygienic
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there are
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diseases issue create such as blood pressure, heart beat are
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, they avoid a home made
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is
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weight is increasing there is no excuse in our body and can feel that unhealthy.
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is from
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for vehicles and not
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foot.

On the other side, there are ample ways to solve the
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every
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should duty to avoid from restaurants
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. And more time prefer
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to home made
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. It's a hygienic
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is
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healthily
life style in our country.
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is more and more excise
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a special diet such as meat, fish are adding on our diet.
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moreover
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related awareness camp
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in our cities
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is say and
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more knowledge about them.

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IELTS essay Somepeoplethinkthatmuseumsandartgalleriesshouldconcentrateontheworksoftheirowncountriesinsteadoftheworksofartfrom otherpartsoftheworld. Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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