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Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. P3mE
Today, climate is changing day by day, due to global warming and other effects and it has some positive and negative impacts on world. This has been seen that changing climate brings some negative impacts, but on the other hand it also brings some positivity for some businesses. This can be proven by analyzing the both good and terrible affects for climate change. Looking first at changing climate is adversely affected our environment, agriculture and businesses. For instance, due to change in climate, cool weather becomes coolest and hot will be hottest. Furthermore, it is also awful for farmers, and in business perspective, it has affected the businesses as well. On the other hand, many argue that it is good for some traders, for example, a cold drink and ice cream companies can take an advantage of warm weather, because consumption of these products in more in hot weather, and whatsmore, some campanies can take a benefits from the cool weather by selling its hodies, coats and other wearing products. In conclusion, after analyzing both point of views, climate change has a more negative impacts than its positive in business and environment, so, we need to take part and try to stop global warming and other effects.
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effects and it has
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some
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positive
and
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impacts on world. This has been
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seen
that changing
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climate
brings
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some
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negative
impacts,
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on the
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other
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also
brings
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some
positivity for
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some
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businesses
. This can
be proven
by analyzing the both
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good
and terrible affects for
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climate
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change
.

Looking
first
at changing
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climate
is
adversely
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affected
our environment, agriculture and
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businesses
.
For instance
, due to
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change
in
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climate
, cool
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weather
becomes coolest and hot will be hottest.
Furthermore
, it is
also
awful for farmers, and in
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business
perspective, it has
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affected
the
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businesses
as well
.

On the
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other
hand,
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many
argue that it is
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good
for
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some
traders,
for example
, a
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cold
drink and ice cream
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companies
can take an advantage of warm
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weather
,
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because
consumption of these products in more in hot
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weather
, and
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whatsmore
,
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some
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campanies
can take
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a benefits
from the cool
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weather
by selling its
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hodies
, coats and
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other
wearing products.

In conclusion
, after analyzing both point of views,
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climate
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change
has a more
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negative
impacts than its
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positive
in
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business
and environment,
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so
, we need to
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take part
and try to
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stop
global warming and
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other
effects.

IELTS essay Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses.

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4 paragraphs
207 words
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