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Nowadays business face problems with new employees who just finished their education and lack of some interpersonal skills such and work in a team. what do u think what are the cause of this? how can it be resolved?

Nowadays business face problems with new employees who just finished their education and lack of some interpersonal skills such and work in a team. what do u think what are the cause of this? how can it be resolved? bGWl
It has been observed by many experts that in certain organizations where new workers would not have such interpersonal abilities. If asked, there are several reasons for this situation; however proactive actions should be implemented in order to resolve this. Both the aspects could be elaborated further. There are several valid reasons behind this issue. The foremost one is, new employees have not gain such skills in their student life. By this I mean, nowadays in this morden world most of them only focus on student's grade instead of their overall progression. Therefore, throughout their life they would not learn this type of skill. As a result, when they employed in a company so that time they will definitely faced problem related to the how to socialize with other co-workers. On the contrary, a number of measures should be taken for it. To begin with, schools have to include practical work in their curriculum. In other words, they need to organize group projects, sports events for their learners so by performing these type of activities they certainly enhance their abilities. Consequently, they may not have certain hurdles in their work place and especially for how to cooperate with other members. For instance, when my father was employed in one company in this new workers have a issue regarding to this and due to this institution lost their profit. But, leader of it regulate training for freshers where they learnt that type of skills, by this they recovered their profit. To conclude, it can be eventually commented that although new workers have lack of interpersonal skills because they did not learn it in their academic life; on the other hand schools organization must include some practical work for their pupils.
It has
been observed
by
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many
experts that in certain organizations where
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new
workers would not have such interpersonal abilities. If asked, there are several reasons for this situation;
however
proactive actions should
be implemented
in order to resolve this. Both the aspects could
be elaborated
further
.

There are several valid reasons behind this issue. The foremost one is,
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new
employees have not
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gain
such
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skills
in their student life. By this I mean, nowadays in this
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morden
world most of them
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only
focus on student's grade
instead
of their
overall
progression.
Therefore
, throughout their life they would not learn this type of
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skill
.
As a result
, when they employed in a
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company
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so
that time they will definitely
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faced
problem related to
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the how
to socialize with
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other
co-workers.

On the contrary
, a number of measures should
be taken
for it. To
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begin
with, schools
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have to
include practical work in their curriculum. In
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other
words, they need to organize group projects, sports
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events
for their learners
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so
by performing these type of activities they
certainly
enhance their abilities.
Consequently
, they may not have certain hurdles in their work place and
especially
for how to cooperate with
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other
members.

For instance
, when my father
was employed
in one
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company
in this
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new
workers have
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a
issue
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regarding to
this and due to this institution lost their profit.
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But
, leader of it regulate training for freshers where they
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learnt
that type of
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skills
, by this they recovered their profit.

To conclude
, it can be
eventually
commented that although
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new
workers have lack of interpersonal
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skills
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because
they did not learn it in their academic life; on the
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other
hand schools organization
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must
include
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some
practical work for their pupils.
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IELTS essay Nowadays business face problems with new employees who just finished their education and lack of some interpersonal skills such and work in a team. what do u think what are the cause of this? how can it be resolved?

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