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Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

The environment has been changing since when the earth made. However, Never every, the human did think, can we measure by our equipment. The second side of who have their own work. They do claim that when rains come by our products become spoil. On the other hand, people deem that, it is a benefit for our works. In worldwide is being in every place, and in this matter, the human will be nothing do. Because it is naturally. This diminishes is being dominated on who have a harvest business and builders. When they sowing any fruit in the earth, only fear of bad Strom and so on. Moreover, the farmers have to buy so many safety stuff for plants. For example, a plastic sheet is too dear to cover up the whole rice and Et cetera. It has become a big problem for them, in other words, those have tired up. Who is doing work in the constructor side for has been bigger painful. such as trouble for transporting the cement, because heavy rain with occur road has been damaged, and more than sand is slipping by water. Due to getting a big blow to civil engineers. Secondly, Who for, it has very helpful. One-half masses are living, where is not rivers and lack of monsoon. even if the government will not do provide for them, service, therefore, outsiders are depended on weather condition. They knew that when will come water from the sky. Furthermore, can be saved money, and rid of expansive fuel. Like that, dates and palm trees to need vast aqua. Those already done storage wet in the human-made digs. To conclude, Some for, it brings too much happiness and low cost in growing. But who for, it has become a headache, as plummeting bad cloud at working sites.
The environment has been changing since when the earth made.
However
, Never every, the human did
think
, can we measure by our equipment. The second side of
who
have their
own
work. They do claim that when rains
come
by our products become spoil.
On the other hand
,
people
deem that, it is a benefit for our works.

In worldwide is being in every place, and in this matter, the human will be nothing do.
Because
it is
naturally
. This diminishes is
being dominated
on
who
have a harvest business and builders. When
they sowing
any fruit in the earth,
only
fear of
bad
Strom
and
so
on.
Moreover
, the farmers
have to
buy
so
many
safety stuff for plants.
For example
, a plastic sheet is too dear to cover up the whole rice and Et cetera. It has become a
big
problem for them,
in other words
, those have tired up.
Who
is doing work in the constructor side for has been bigger painful.
such
as trouble for transporting the cement,
because
heavy rain with occur road has
been damaged
, and more than sand is slipping by water. Due to getting a
big
blow to civil engineers.
Secondly
,
Who
for, it has
very
helpful. One-half masses are living, where is not rivers and lack of monsoon.
even
if the
government
will not do provide for them, service,
therefore
, outsiders
are depended
on weather condition. They knew that when will
come
water from the sky.
Furthermore
, can
be saved
money, and rid of expansive fuel. Like that, dates and palm trees to need vast aqua. Those already done storage wet in the human-made digs.
To conclude
,
Some
for, it brings too much happiness and low cost in growing.
But
who
for, it has become a headache, as plummeting
bad
cloud at working sites.
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IELTS essay Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses.

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303 words
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