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Some think scientists should be allowed to send messages into space to communicate with other life forms while others believe this is too dangerous. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some think scientists should be allowed to send messages into space to communicate with other life forms while others believe this is too dangerous. GOyx
Some scholar think that, the communication with alien should be permited, while others thinks it is hazardous. From my perspective, suppose an idea such as creating of all universe is just for only human generation is meaningless and probablity of the number of stars that could support some form of life is a reason why we should be in contact with cosmos. As a basic instict, a man always affraid of the the thing that is unknown. Despite the technological advance that using for reseach information about space, there are not enough knowladge about life forms in outer of Earth. Likehood of alien life form turning against to humanty and destroying the mankind look like a scene from sci-fi movies, but small precision can be considered as a too great to ignore. On other hand, the main elements that seperate human from all living creatures is curiorities which lead to all discoveries in the science. There are millions of galaxies in the atmosphere and Milkway is just one of them. Maybe even some older civilization of human race's ancestors. As a increase in population caused catasrophic problems and most of them affect the nature of world. In the future there won't a place like home because of the enviromental impacts. Finding of extraterrestrial intellegence can aid us to preventing the destruction of people or simply they can share their land with us.
Some
scholar
think
that, the communication with alien should be
permited
, while others
thinks
it is hazardous. From my perspective, suppose an
idea
such as creating of all universe is
just
for
only
human generation is meaningless and
probablity
of the number of stars that could support
some
form of life is a reason why we should be in contact with cosmos.

As a basic
instict
, a
man
always
affraid
of
the the
thing
that is
unknown. Despite the technological advance that using for
reseach
information about space, there are not
enough
knowladge
about life forms in outer of Earth.
Likehood
of alien life form turning against to
humanty
and destroying the mankind look like a scene from sci-fi movies,
but
small
precision can
be considered
as a too great to
ignore
.

On other hand, the main elements that
seperate
human from all living creatures is
curiorities
which lead to all discoveries in the science. There are millions of galaxies in the atmosphere and
Milkway
is
just
one of them. Maybe even
some
older civilization of human race's ancestors. As
a
increase in population caused
catasrophic
problems and most of them affect the nature of world. In the future there won't a place like home
because
of the
enviromental
impacts. Finding of extraterrestrial
intellegence
can aid us to preventing the destruction of
people
or
simply
they can share their land with us.
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IELTS essay Some think scientists should be allowed to send messages into space to communicate with other life forms while others believe this is too dangerous.

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