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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Write at least 250 words

Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? rQ9L
Theseday, in forn county students faced some difficulties has been a prevailing issue in significant part of the world. The dramatic changes has been witnessed compare with past the following paragraphs would explain possible reasons for the problems and propose a handful of remedial measures To begin with the reasons, first and foremost children faced some problems because they pay her fees in college. Hence government some rules follows they not bourdon in students for study time. Secondly, students not asking with family they payment my fees because already they some people faced There is no doubt that, every problems has a solution similarly, some solutions should be implemented government new rules follows first they provides loans then not bourdon in visitor students. Students fees will be free. some new facilities available after that 3year government preference to students will be PR To conclude e I would like to state the family were easy to support her children government follow new rules then family were not bourdon both should put their some effort together in order to minimize the problems.
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Theseday
, in
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forn
county
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students
faced
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some
difficulties has been a prevailing issue in significant part of the world. The dramatic
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changes
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has
been witnessed
compare with past the following paragraphs would
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explain
possible reasons for the
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problems
and propose a handful of remedial
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measures


To
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begin
with the reasons,
first
and foremost children faced
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some
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problems
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because
they pay her fees in college.
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Hence
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government
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some
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rules
follows they not
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bourdon
in
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students
for study time.
Secondly
,
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students
not asking with family
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they payment
my fees
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because
already they
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some
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people
faced

There is no doubt that, every
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problems
has a solution
similarly
,
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some
solutions should
be implemented
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government
new
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rules
follows
first
they
The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "provide"
provides
loans then not
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bourdon
in visitor
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students
.
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Students fees
will be free.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
some
new facilities available after that 3year
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government
preference to
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students
will be
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PR


To conclude
e I would like to state the family were easy to support her children
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government
follow new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
then family were not
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bourdon
both should put their
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some
effort together in order to minimize the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
.
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IELTS essay Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
180 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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