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Some scientists think that computers will soon become more intelligent than humans. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some scientists think that computers will soon become more intelligent than humans. with this statement? x3Lg
Nowadays, artifical intellegence has taken over the world that most of the jobs has become human free and robots are controling the most job, it is because the technology has advanced to an infinte extent, some people believe that artifical intelelgence will supersede human intellegence in near time, while other beileve that natural intelegence cannot be taken over at anyways. This essay is written in believe that human intelect will always be greater over other man made technologies. To begin with, computers do not contain natural intellegence they are artifically driven and manmade therefore no matter how much they advanced through technology, computers cannot supersede human intellegence. For example, the famous scientist made a robot which can perform basic house chores, but it was designed to work on certain areas such as house, offices etc and malfunctioned when used on different platform like industries, factories, poolsides etc for same work. On other hand, THese thinking machines are manmade miracle, astonishingly it can perform each and every task required or ordered to it. they are like copy of human brain, Recently a human like robot named Sophia was introduced to the world ehich to our surpsie can mimic human emotiopns and expressions and one cannot simply tell if its real or fake person unless focused. In conclusion, the artifical machines is achievement human have ever made in technologocal grounds, it has turned lives upside down however, it cannot compete with human's brainpower because natural minds are creation which is still very little explored while artifical skill creation is only limited to the known skill of man.
Nowadays,
artifical
intellegence
has taken over the world that most of the jobs has become
human
free and robots are
controling
the

most job, it is
because
the technology has advanced to an
infinte
extent,
some
people
believe that
artifical
intelelgence
will supersede
human
intellegence


in
near time, while other
beileve
that natural
intelegence
cannot
be taken
over at anyways. This essay
is written
in believe that
human
intelect
will
always


be
greater over other
man
made technologies.

To
begin
with, computers do not contain natural
intellegence
they are
artifically
driven and
manmade
therefore
no matter how much they advanced

through
technology, computers cannot supersede
human
intellegence
.
For example
, the
famous
scientist made a robot which can perform
basic


house
chores,
but
it
was designed
to work on certain areas such as
house
, offices etc and malfunctioned when
used
on
different
platform

like
industries, factories, poolsides etc for same work.

On other hand,
THese
thinking machines are
manmade
miracle,
astonishingly
it can perform each and every task required or ordered to it. they are like copy of

human brain, Recently a
human
like robot named Sophia
was introduced
to the world
ehich
to our
surpsie
can mimic
human
emotiopns
and expressions

and
one cannot
simply
tell
if its real or fake person unless focused.

In conclusion
, the
artifical
machines is achievement
human
have ever made in
technologocal
grounds, it has turned
lives
upside down
however
, it cannot compete with human's

brainpower
because
natural minds are creation which is
still
very
little
explored while
artifical
skill
creation is
only
limited to the known
skill
of
man
.
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IELTS essay Some scientists think that computers will soon become more intelligent than humans. with this statement?

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