Some says that the government should not spent the money on the art because music and painting for example are not making people's life becoming better. Do you agree or disagree? v.2
Some says that the government should not spent the money on the art because music and painting for example are not making people's life becoming better. v. 2
Spending money on art should not the preference of government, as opine by some, who relate it with the non-existent impact on the lives of people. I completely agree with this assertion and will explain why money expend is essential on development purposes only.
First of all, money should be spend on basic necessities of life which have direct influence on people. This means that the major portion of budget should be allocated for the relief purposes, such as subsidizing the tax-payers and free healthcare. If public is lacking basic facilities and government is investing in art, such as construction of monuments, then these will merely be considered as the vanity projects of politicians; which, although, are built by the taxes, however, tax-payers are not benefiting from those. This can lead to serious consequences, for example, Strikes and riots.
Furthermore, art projects does not constitute in development of country, for example, Cinema and Stadium are meant for leisure activities only. Take the example of Dubai, as it has world class shopping malls and luxurious outing places, but on the other hand, depend on other countries for skilled manpower such as Engineers, Doctors and even Teachers to work in relevant departments. This clearly shows that the priorities should be set, for instance, Finland allocate major portion of their budget on education, and consequently, its advances in research and technology are example for world.
In conclusion, although art has its own place, but extrapolating results from aforementioned points, it seems wise to state that money ought to be spend for the betterment of public through subsidies and construction which will not only increase jobs but also raise quality of life.
Spending
money
on
art
should not the preference of
government
, as opine by
some
, who relate it with the non-existent impact on the
lives
of
people
. I completely
agree
with this assertion and will
explain
why
money
expend is essential on development purposes
only
.
First of all
,
money
should be
spend
on
basic necessities
of life which have direct influence on
people
. This means that the major portion of budget should
be allocated
for the relief purposes, such as subsidizing the tax-payers and free healthcare. If public is lacking basic facilities and
government
is investing in
art
, such as construction of monuments, then these will
merely
be considered
as the vanity projects of politicians; which, although,
are built
by the taxes,
however
, tax-payers are not benefiting from those. This can lead to serious consequences, for
example
, Strikes and riots.
Furthermore
,
art
projects does not constitute in development of country, for
example
, Cinema and Stadium
are meant
for leisure activities
only
. Take the
example
of Dubai, as it has world
class
shopping malls and luxurious outing places,
but
on the other hand
, depend on other countries for skilled manpower such as Engineers, Doctors and even Teachers to work in relevant departments. This
clearly
shows
that the priorities should
be set
,
for instance
, Finland allocate major portion of their budget on education, and
consequently
, its advances in research and technology are
example
for world.
In conclusion
, although
art
has its
own
place,
but
extrapolating results from aforementioned points, it seems wise to state that
money
ought to be
spend
for the betterment of public through subsidies and construction which will not
only
increase jobs
but
also
raise quality of life.
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12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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