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some say that people working in a different job roles should get different amount of holiday time do you agree or disagree give your opinion and examples from your own experience

some say that people working in a different job roles should get different amount of holiday time give your opinion and examples from your own experience 05KG
Now days most of people doing variant job and their working days are pass with stress. Therefore, holiday is essential part for those people who are always stayed under burden. In this easy I will agree that, people work on the particular position, should get distinct holiday time. In the last explain with example and own experience. Firstly, people are work under various type of profession, part of occupation needs more holiday and other deserve weekend off. People usually every day involved in their job work, consequently they did not give priority to their family. However, holiday time people occupy for family, cause more family create issues and misunderstanding and reason is given less time. Increase work load and occur much health problem. Holiday time given to pampered their family and also take care their body. Secondly, they are never missed dissimilar occasion and festival due to the few off days. They joyfully experience little enjoying movements on special days. People easily get rest and fresh nap their mind in weekend days although that's not abundance for few people who are much time engaged their work. Several company and factory give special day off for their employee after complete they huge work and get Chance to relief physically and mentally. In additionally, I will share my own experience about that. I'am working as employee and spend much time with my colleagues and limited time pass with my family members. Simply I'm earned money though I'm not able to get happiness from family side due to time consequence, may be holidays support to fill that sorrow. I have faced lots of problems due to the fact off days are limited. To conclude, part of time less working days are bad influence on their lifestyle. Extra holidays are essential for own self and other members.
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days most of
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doing variant job and their working days are pass with
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stress
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,
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holiday
is essential part for those
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who are always stayed under burden. In this easy I will
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people
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work
on the particular position, should
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get
distinct
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holiday
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time
. In the last
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explain
with example and
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,
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people
are
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work
under various type of profession, part of occupation needs more
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holiday
and other deserve weekend
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off
.
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People
usually
every day involved in their job
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work
,
consequently
they did not give priority to their
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family
.
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,
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holiday
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time
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occupy for
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, cause more
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family
create issues and misunderstanding and reason is
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given
less
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time
. Increase
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load and occur much health problem.
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Holiday
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time
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given
to pampered their
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family
and
also
take care their body.

Secondly
, they are never missed dissimilar occasion and festival due to the few
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off
days. They
joyfully
experience
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little
enjoying movements on special days.
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easily
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get
rest and fresh nap their mind in weekend days although that's not abundance for few
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people
who are much
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time
engaged their
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work
. Several
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company
and factory give special day
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off
for their employee after complete they huge
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work
and
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get
Chance to relief
physically
and mentally.

In
additionally
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experience about that. I'
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working as employee and spend much
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time
with my colleagues and limited
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time
pass with my
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family
members.
Simply
I'm earned money though I'm not able to
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get
happiness from
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family
side due to
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time
consequence, may be
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holidays
support to fill that sorrow. I have faced lots of problems due to the fact
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off
days
are limited
.

To conclude
, part of
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time
less working days are
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bad
influence on their lifestyle. Extra
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holidays
are essential for
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own
self and other members.
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IELTS essay some say that people working in a different job roles should get different amount of holiday time give your opinion and examples from your own experience

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
303 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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