Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Some poeple think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimal legal age for driving acar or motor

Some poeple think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimal legal age for driving acar or motor gAlBl

Some individuals believes that road accidents can be increasingly prevented by fixing a minimal age limit for driving automobiles. It is due to at this perticular age the youngsters are more responsible and this can also have a significant economical benefits. I totally agree with the prior statement. This essay will discuss the factors that supports this statement. Fixing the age limit can make the person more responsible to handle the vehicles by obeying all the rules and regulations of traffic. This can protect the life a lots of predestrians that are in danger now a days. Restless and reckless driving kills a lots of upcoming generations. To bring in control of all the previlages this is one of crucial step. For example in India the minimal age of license have rised to 21 to reduce the road crash The economy is significantly benefited by bringing a control in age limit. The underaged people preffer mainly on public transport for commuting this effectively reduces the unnecessary usage of vehicle and there by decreaes the air pollution. Inaddition, the fuel uasge and there by it can be conserve for the next generation In conclusion, government should fix the age limit to protect the life of citizens and to make them more responsible to handle the same. This can also reduces the vehicle usage and there by fuels can preserve to an extent

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 individuals You should probably use "believe".believe
believes
 that road accidents can be increasingly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :precluded
prevented
 by fixing a minimal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrestrictionceilingrestraintcapmaximumcurb
limit
 for driving automobiles. It is due to at this Possible spelling mistake found.particular
perticular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 the youngsters are more responsible and this can also
 have a significant Did you mean "economic" (=connected with economy)?economic
economical
 benefits. I totally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the prior statement. This essay will discuss the factors that supports this statement. Fixing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrestrictionceilingrestraintcapmaximumcurb
limit
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the person more responsible to handle the vehicles by obeying all the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 and regulations of traffic. This can protect the life Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a lot" or simply "lots"?a lotlots
a lots
 of Possible spelling mistake found.pedestrians
predestrians
 that are in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardrisk
danger
Did you mean "nowadays"?nowadays
now a days
. Restless and reckless driving kills Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a lot" or simply "lots"?a lotlots
a lots
 of upcoming generations. To bring in control of all the Possible spelling mistake found.privilegespreimages
previlages
 this is one of crucial step. For example
 in India the minimal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 of license have Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "rose", the past tense form of the verb 'rise'?roseraisedriserisenrisesrisked
rised
 to 21 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the road Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphcrash.crash!crash?crash:crash,crash;
crash


The economy is significantly
 benefited by bringing a control in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrestrictionceilingrestraintcapmaximumcurb
limit
. The Possible spelling mistake found.underageunder aged
underaged
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
Possible spelling mistake found.preferprofferpref ferPfeffer
preffer
mainly
 on public transport for commuting this effectively
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviates
reduces
 the unnecessary usage of vehicle and there by Possible spelling mistake found.decreasedecreasesdecrees
decreaes
 the air pollution. Possible spelling mistake found.In addition
Inaddition
, the fuel Possible spelling mistake found.usage
uasge
 and there by it can be Consider using a past participle here: "conserved".conserved
conserve
 for the next
 generation

In conclusion
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrestrictionceilingrestraintcapmaximumcurb
limit
 to protect the life of citizens and to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them more responsible to handle the same. This can also
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "reduce"reduce
reduces
 the vehicle usage and there by fuels can preserve to an Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphextent.extent!extent?extent:extent,extent;
extent