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Some people work for the same organization all their working live. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

The attitude of working for organizations has been at the center of a global concern over the last few decades. Although the majority of people work for various organizations during their working lives, there are still some individuals who remain loyal to only one organization. The question, however, is whether people should work for different organizations or only one organization. In this essay, I shall examine both positive and negative aspects of this argument.
The attitude of working for
organizations
has been at the center of a global concern over the last few decades. Although the majority of
people
work for various
organizations
during their working
lives
, there are
still
some
individuals who remain loyal to
only
one
organization
. The question,
however
, is whether
people
should work for
different
organizations
or
only
one
organization
. In this essay, I shall examine both
positive
and
negative
aspects of this argument.
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IELTS essay Some people work for the same organization all their working live. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.

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  American English
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74 words
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