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How dating has changed over the last 30 years

All you need is. . . LOVE? Ever since Adam and Eve, human beings have faced the challenge of finding a partner, a mate to share their lives with, to raise a family and ensure the continuity of the species – OMG, this is getting serious! -. But being a difficult task itself, the way people have managed to fulfill it has experienced a dramatic change in the last few years. Social media and online dating applications are to blame for it. But, are these modern ways of dating worth using? Can love be found with them? Back in the old days, people used to meet each other in public spaces, such as pubs, balls or discos. On the one hand, getting to know somebody special happened to be a rather spontaneous thing most of the times, as well as a matter of luck or fate. Outgoing, self-confident people were more likely to succeed in flirting, whereas shy people were hardly able to approach anybody, and had little chance of picking up somebody. But, on the other hand, there was the fact that the vast majority of people were looking for a steady relationship, which was really helpful to avoid misunderstandings These traditional ways of meeting romantic partners have almost remained the same over the past half-century, but are less common nowadays. In fact, the use of online dating apps is getting more and more popular mainly among the youth. Truth be told, these apps can make it easier to find the perfect match, although many online daters believe it is very common for those who use these platforms to lie to try to appear more desirable. Besides, the main problem will be finding out what the other persons wants. In that sense, most people would agree that hardly anybody wants to “get steady” today and that most people just try to have fun. So, what's the best way of finding love? Both ways of meeting people have their pros and cons, and each person should choose the one that best suits his/her needs. In the end, whether you meet on Tinder, or you meet at a bar, you can end up finding "the one. "
All you need is. . .
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LOVE
?

Ever since Adam and Eve, human beings have faced the challenge of
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finding
a partner, a mate to share their
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lives
with, to raise a family and ensure the continuity of the species – OMG, this is getting serious! -.

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But
being a difficult task itself, the
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way
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people
have managed to fulfill it has experienced a dramatic
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change
in the last few years. Social media and online dating applications are to blame for it.
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But
, are these modern
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ways
of dating worth using? Can
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love
be found
with them?

Back in the
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old
days,
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people
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used
to
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meet
each other in public spaces, such as pubs, balls or discos. On the one hand, getting to know somebody special happened to be a
rather
spontaneous thing most of the times,
as well
as a matter of luck or fate. Outgoing, self-confident
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people
were more likely to succeed in flirting, whereas shy
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people
were hardly able to approach anybody, and had
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little
chance of picking up somebody.
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But
,
on the other hand
, there was the fact that the vast majority of
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people
were looking for a steady relationship, which was
really
helpful to avoid misunderstandings

These traditional
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ways
of meeting romantic partners have almost remained the same over the past half-century,
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but
are less common nowadays. In fact, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of online dating apps is getting more and more popular
mainly
among the youth. Truth be
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told
, these apps can
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make
it easier to find the perfect match, although
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many
online daters believe it is
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very
common for those who
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use
these platforms to lie to try to appear more desirable.
Besides
, the main problem will be
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finding
out what the other persons wants. In that sense, most
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people
would
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agree
that hardly anybody wants to “
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get
steady”
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today
and that most
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people
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just
try to have fun.

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So
, what's the best
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way
of
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finding
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love
? Both
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ways
of meeting
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people
have their pros and cons, and each person should choose the one that best suits his/her needs. In the
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end
, whether you
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meet
on Tinder, or you
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meet
at a bar, you can
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end
up
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finding
"the one. "
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IELTS essay How dating has changed over the last 30 years

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
365 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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