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Some people think youngers leaders are more in organisation then older why

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Leaders in organisation are playing a pivotal role to do smooth working with inovative ideas and modern techniques and youngsters are more then old personsYoung persons are often do more prefer to do work in organisations in smooth manner and using modern technology and their capacity to do work is always more then olders. their minds are more innovative to invent the new things by using modern implements and equipments for instance the youngsters have a more knowledge to do work on computers then olders. On the other hand old people are also playing an integral role to do work in organizations with great efficiency and are more experienced to tackle the problems if come before them and due to their passion they do work more and effectively. Old people are do more sacrifice to do work for long time. In conclusion olders and youngsters both group of people play good role with efficiency in different organizations using modern techniques and with innovative methods and broad solutions.
Leaders in
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inovative
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modern
techniques and youngsters are more
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old
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in
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in smooth manner and using
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modern
technology and their capacity to do
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work
is always more
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then
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olders
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their
minds are more innovative to invent the new things by using
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modern
implements and equipments
for instance
the youngsters have a more knowledge to do
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work
on computers
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olders
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organizations
with great efficiency and are more experienced to tackle the problems if
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come
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before
them and due to their passion they do
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work
more and
effectively
.
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Old
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people
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work
for long time.
In conclusion
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olders
and youngsters both group of
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people
play
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good
role with efficiency in
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different
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organizations
using
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modern
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IELTS essay Some people think youngers leaders are more in organisation then older why

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
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