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Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.

Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice. BJYKw
Women should of course be given equal rights to perform to the best of their ability (good collocation) in the market place Generous provisions and allowances should be made into law to encourage this behavior and allow females to also fairly take time out from the career ladder to pursue a family. Making legal structures to facilitate this transition would not only help to improve the worker’s happiness and wellbeing but also improve the health of society as a whole. Japan has a rather bleak future due to the low fertility rate, perhaps this kind of future could be avoided with more generous legislation. Definitely should pursue a career and definitely fulfil the traditional family role also. Government should help make both objectives possible.
Women should
of course
be
given
equal rights to perform to the best of their ability (
good
collocation) in the market place

Generous provisions and allowances should
be made
into law to encourage this behavior and
allow
females to
also
fairly
take time out from the career ladder to pursue a family. Making legal structures to facilitate this transition would not
only
help
to
improve
the worker’s happiness and
wellbeing
but
also
improve
the health of society as a whole.

Japan has a
rather
bleak future due to the low fertility rate, perhaps this kind of future could
be avoided
with more generous legislation.

Definitely should pursue a career and definitely fulfil the traditional family role
also
.
Government
should
help
make
both objectives possible.
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IELTS essay Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.

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