Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

some people think we have many choices.do you agree?

some people think we have many choices. do you agree? m1NRd

Nowdays, many people feel that we have too many selections that we can choose from them. I tataly agree with this opinion due to some reasons that I am going to explain them in next paragraphs. the first reason why I agree we have internet and we can select from many choices that it is our favorite one or it is according to our mind. To illustrate, some times I need some clothes and I do not have time to go shopping, so I search in some websites. I can find the best one without giong out, in less time and just with some clicks. Another reason why I support the nation that every person has too many ideas in his mind and when he wants to crate something, he can produce some new and creative things. When this productions come together, we have chance to select from various things. For example, Iranian people are expert in carpet weaving<so when we wish to have unique carpet, we find carpets colorful and with different designs. We can buy carpet that we are enthusiastic about it. In conclusion, I completely agree that we have different selections and we can choose from them. For reasons that I metioned them above like internet, produce various things, etc.

Possible spelling mistake found.NowadaysNowaysNow days
Nowdays
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 feel that we have too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 selections that we can choose from them. I Possible spelling mistake found.totalItalytotallyfatalfatallytally
tataly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this opinion due to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reasons
 that I am going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 them in next
 paragraphs. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reason
 why I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 we have Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).internet, and
internet and
 we can select from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 choices that it is our favorite one or it is according to our mind. To illustrate, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 times I need This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 clothes and I do not have time to go shopping, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I search in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 websites. I can find the best one without Possible spelling mistake found.goinggong
giong
 out, in less time and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 clicks. Another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reason
 why I support the nation that every person has too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 in his mind and when he wants to crate something, he can produce This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 new and creative things. When Did you mean "these"?these
this
 productions This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 together, we have chance to select from various things. For example
, Iranian This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are expert in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtapestryrugcarpeting
carpet
 weaving<This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 when we wish to have unique You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtapestryrugcarpeting
carpet
, we find You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtapestryrugcarpeting
carpets
 colorful and with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 designs. We can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtapestryrugcarpeting
carpet
 that we are enthusiastic about it. In conclusion
, I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that we have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).selections, and
selections and
 we can choose from them. For You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reasons
 that I Possible spelling mistake found.mentionedmotioned
metioned
 them above like internet, produce various things, etc. 