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some people think we have many choices.do you agree?

some people think we have many choices. do you agree? m1NRd
Nowdays, many people feel that we have too many selections that we can choose from them. I tataly agree with this opinion due to some reasons that I am going to explain them in next paragraphs. the first reason why I agree we have internet and we can select from many choices that it is our favorite one or it is according to our mind. To illustrate, some times I need some clothes and I do not have time to go shopping, so I search in some websites. I can find the best one without giong out, in less time and just with some clicks. Another reason why I support the nation that every person has too many ideas in his mind and when he wants to crate something, he can produce some new and creative things. When this productions come together, we have chance to select from various things. For example, Iranian people are expert in carpet weaving<so when we wish to have unique carpet, we find carpets colorful and with different designs. We can buy carpet that we are enthusiastic about it. In conclusion, I completely agree that we have different selections and we can choose from them. For reasons that I metioned them above like internet, produce various things, etc.
Nowdays
,
many
people
feel that we have too
many
selections that we can choose from them. I
tataly
agree
with this opinion due to
some
reasons
that I am going to
explain
them in
next
paragraphs.
the
first
reason
why I
agree
we have
internet and
we can select from
many
choices that it is our favorite one or it is according to our mind. To illustrate,
some
 times I need
some
clothes and I do not have time to go shopping,
so
I search in
some
websites. I can find the best one without
giong
out, in less time and
just
with
some
clicks. Another
reason
why I support the nation that every person has too
many
ideas
in his mind and when he wants to crate something, he can produce
some
new and creative things. When
this
productions
come
together, we have chance to select from various things.
For example
, Iranian
people
are expert in
carpet
weaving<
so
when we wish to have unique
carpet
, we find
carpets
colorful and with
different
designs. We can
buy
carpet
that we are enthusiastic about it.
In conclusion
, I completely
agree
that we have
different
selections and
we can choose from them. For
reasons
that I
metioned
them above like internet, produce various things, etc.
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IELTS essay some people think we have many choices. do you agree?

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