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Increasing petrol prices is the best way to protect the environment? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Increasing petrol prices is the best way to protect the environment? 158rX
It is clear that the world is facing many environmental problems. Some people suggest that the optimal way to solve these problems is raising the prices of petrol. In my opinion, this measure is ineffective and there are much better ways to protect the environment. First of all, making fuel more expensive simply will not work. In the past, petrol prices had increased significantly, however, it did not have any effect on fuel consumption: people still bought and drove their own vehicles, and factories still increased their production and released more and more pollutants. Furthermore, fuel consumption is just one of the many activities that cause pollution. For example, deforestation, the use of plastic and the huge amount of domestic waste all contaminate the environment. Increasing the prices of petrol is unlikely to have any impact on these factors, and therefore it cannot be considered the best way to protect the environment. Second, there are much better solutions to environmental problems. One of them is investing in green technology. By making eco-friendly sources of energy more available and affordable, we can greatly reduce our impact on the environment. Another measure is educating the public on the importance of sustainable living. Ordinary people do a variety of things every day that harm the environment, and if all of us were more conscious of this negative impact that we have on the planet, we could make a huge difference to environmental issues. In conclusion, increasing the prices of petrol is not a good way to protect the environment, and other measures should be considered.
It is
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clear
that the world is facing
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many
environmental problems.
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Some
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people
suggest that the optimal way to solve these problems is raising the
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prices
of
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petrol
. In my opinion, this measure is ineffective and there are much better ways to protect the environment.

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First of all
, making fuel more expensive
simply
will not work. In the past,
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petrol
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prices
had increased
significantly
,
however
, it did not have any effect on fuel consumption:
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people
still
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bought
and drove their
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own
vehicles, and factories
still
increased their production and released more and more pollutants.
Furthermore
, fuel consumption is
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just
one of the
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many
activities that cause pollution.
For example
, deforestation, the
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use
of plastic and the huge amount of domestic waste all contaminate the
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environment
. Increasing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
of
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petrol
is unlikely to have any impact on these factors, and
therefore
it cannot
be considered
the best way to protect the environment.

Second, there are much better solutions to environmental problems. One of them is investing in green technology. By making eco-friendly sources of energy more available and affordable, we can
greatly
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reduce
our impact on the
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environment
. Another measure is educating the public on the importance of sustainable living. Ordinary
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
do a variety of things every day that harm the
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environment
, and if all of us were more conscious of this
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negative
impact that we have on the planet, we could
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make
a huge difference to environmental issues.

In conclusion
, increasing the
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prices
of
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petrol
is not a
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good
way to protect the
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environment
, and other measures should
be considered
.
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IELTS essay Increasing petrol prices is the best way to protect the environment?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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