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The given picture illustrates all steps to produce milk.

The given picture illustrates all steps to produce milk. pKXQ0

The given picture illustrates all steps to produce milk. Overall, there are 6 steps in the process. It Begins with milking cows twice a day and concludes with selling milk products in supermarkets and shops. The first step is using the machine to milk cows two times a day then the milk which is taken from cows is saved in refrigeration storage to protect the taste and keep milk away from any harmful bacteria. The following step is shipping milk by milk tanker daily delivery to dairy. After that milk is used to make cheese, butter, or bottles of milk. In order to release to market, milk is pasteurized to remove any harmful substances and ensure that these milk products do not damage users, after eradicating any viruses milk products are packaged. The last step is all the milk

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 to produce milk.

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Begins
 with milking cows twice a day and concludes with selling You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 products in supermarkets and shops.

The first
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step
 is using the machine to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
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milk
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 from cows is saved
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keep
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milk
 away from any harmful bacteria. The following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 is shipping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
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milk
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milk
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used
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make
 cheese, butter, or bottles of milk.

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milk
is pasteurized
 to remove any harmful substances and ensure that these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 products do not damage users, after eradicating any viruses You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 products are packaged
. The last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
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