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Please write about a time when your courage failed you. What happened? If you could go back in time and change it, what would you do differently (if anything)?

Please write about a time when your courage failed you. What happened? If you could go back in time and change it, what would you do differently (if anything)? 6al13
I began taekwondo in 2018 and was picked for the state championship that same year. I immersed myself in the sport and worked hard to win both the championship and the gold medal. I battled confidently and courageously, but I finally lost the contest. I felt dissatisfied and unmotivated. I even considered quitting the game at one point. My bravery failed me. However, one of my sports heroes, Michael Jordan, comes to mind. Despite being a brilliant player, he and his team lost 11 NBA finals, but it never stopped him from being determined. The concept of Kobe Bryant, "Everything negative-challenge, pressure-is an opportunity for me to rise, " sparked a fire within me. I began to practice hard and improve my game daily. After a year, the next state championship arrived. This time, I didn't worry about a medal; instead, I focused on giving my all to the game. I made it to the last match thanks to my increased gaming and talents, as well as my thought process. My last match was against the same guy who beat me in the bronze medal match last year. My bravery had failed me yet again. I was worried. I calmed myself down and concentrated solely on the game. Throughout the game, I stayed cool and confident, and I finally won the title. I was pleased. I dedicated my gold medal to Michael Jordan, who assisted me in overcoming a period of demotivation and depression in my life. That setback also spurred me to win more titles and become a better golfer. It taught me the guts it needs to face failure and made me fearless in the face of failure. And, as Kobe Bryant famously remarked if you're frightened to fail, you're probably going to fail.
I began taekwondo in 2018 and
was picked
for the state championship that same year. I immersed myself in the sport and worked
hard
to win both the championship and the gold
medal
.
I
battled
confidently
and
courageously
,
but
I
finally
lost the contest.
I
felt dissatisfied and unmotivated.
I
even considered quitting the game at one point. My bravery failed me.
However
, one of my sports heroes, Michael Jordan,
comes
to mind. Despite being a brilliant player, he and his team lost 11 NBA finals,
but
it never
stopped
him from
being determined
. The concept of Kobe Bryant,
"
Everything
negative
-challenge, pressure-is an opportunity for me to rise,
"
sparked a fire within me. I began to practice
hard
and
improve
my game daily. After a year, the
next
state championship arrived. This time, I didn't worry about a
medal
;
instead
, I focused on giving my all to the game. I made it to the last match thanks to my increased gaming and talents,
as well
as my
thought
process. My last match was against the same guy who beat me in the bronze
medal
match last year. My bravery had failed me
yet
again. I
was worried
. I calmed myself down and concentrated
solely
on the game. Throughout the game, I stayed cool and confident, and I
finally
won the title. I was
pleased
. I dedicated my gold
medal
to Michael Jordan, who assisted me in overcoming a period of
demotivation
and depression in my life. That setback
also
spurred me to win more titles and become a better golfer. It taught me the guts it needs to face failure and made me fearless in the face of failure. And, as Kobe Bryant
famously
remarked if you're frightened to fail, you're
probably
going to fail.
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IELTS essay Please write about a time when your courage failed you. What happened? If you could go back in time and change it, what would you do differently (if anything)?

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