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A story behind my family.

A story behind my family. 0pmGq

I live in a immidate family. It consists of four members, my father, mother, brother and I. My father is a government employee, my mother is a home maker and my brother studies in the twelfth standard. I am pursuing my degree at the moment and wish to complete my higher studies in a foreign university. My father is a tall handsome man and is really sincere in whatever he does. While, my mother is adorable and is the most innocent person that I have come across. My brother is a trouble maker but I love him nonetheless.

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live
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 family. It consists of four members, my father, mother, brother and I. My father is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
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home maker
 and my brother studies in the twelfth standard. I am pursuing my degree at the moment and wish to complete my higher studies in a foreign university. My father is a tall handsome This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 and is really
 sincere in whatever he does. While, my mother is adorable and is the most innocent person that I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 across. My brother is a trouble maker This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 him nonetheless. 