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Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problems is to Increase the cost of fuel. To what extent Do you agree or disagree. v.3

Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problems is to Increase the cost of fuel. v. 3
Plethora of environment related issues are caused by fuel consumption all across the world. Therefore, few people consider increasing the fuel price as prominent solution. In my opinion, I do not agree because this might reduce the number of cars on road but there are many other environmental issues which cannot be controlled by this act. On one hand, It is believed that excessive use of transport media, like cars has affected the environment most. Thus, petroleum prices must be increased to minimize environmental damage. But it would be an unwise pinion. Elevating the fuel rates Will also increase prices of other necessary things. Poor, in particular, will find it difficult to overcome their expensive. Hence, the economy of the country will be affected. On the other hand, chemical waste and solid waste also causes environmental issues. These problems cannot be addressed by increasing fuel price. Also, many electrical appliances like, refrigerators and air conditioners emit chlorofluorocarbon gases, which pollute the environment. These problems cannot be controlled by lifting fuel rates. To conclude, I do not agree with this statement. In my opinion. Fuel is the need of time and increasing prices will not affect its usage. We need to move towards Renewable energy sources to overcome this issue.
Plethora of environment related
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issues
are caused
by
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fuel
consumption all across the world.
Therefore
, few
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people
consider increasing the
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fuel
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price
as prominent solution. In my opinion, I do not
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agree
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because
this might
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reduce
the number of cars on road
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but
there are
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many
other environmental
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issues
which cannot
be controlled
by this act.

On one hand, It
is believed
that excessive
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use
of transport media, like cars has
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affected
the environment most.
Thus
, petroleum
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prices
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must
be increased
to minimize environmental damage.
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But
it would be an unwise pinion. Elevating the
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fuel
rates Will
also
increase
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prices
of other necessary things. Poor,
in particular
, will find it difficult to overcome their expensive.
Hence
, the economy of the country will be
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affected
.

On the other hand
, chemical waste and solid waste
also
causes environmental
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issues
. These problems cannot
be addressed
by increasing
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fuel
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price
.
Also
,
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many
electrical appliances like, refrigerators and air conditioners emit chlorofluorocarbon gases, which pollute the environment. These problems cannot
be controlled
by lifting
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fuel
rates.

To conclude
, I do not
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agree
with this statement. In my opinion.
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Fuel
is the need of time and increasing
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prices
will not affect its usage. We need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
towards Renewable energy sources to overcome this
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issue
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problems is to Increase the cost of fuel. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
209 words
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