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Some people think that you can only learn about the cultures of different place by traveling to there. other people think that you can learn just as much about these places from reading books and watching travel documentaries about them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that you can only learn about the cultures of different place by traveling to there. other people think that you can learn just as much about these places from reading books and watching travel documentaries about them. yXD63
There are views of human beings, that the most better way discover something new about cultures of different countries, it's to go and communicate with a local population there, while other people believe reading books and watching travel documentaries is way, which is not worse. This essay will discuss both points of views and express my opinion about this. Firstly, I would like to add from myself, that both ways can use for learning cultures or traditions of countries. Secondly, Visiting any countries it's always new impressions. it's the opportunity to touch my own hands, communicate with local residents, and as a result, your horizons and views will be able to broaden and its can stay in your memory for a long time. For example, Recently I've returned from my trip to Indonesia. Early I had read enormous bound of books about that country, tradition, religion, origin different tribes. it wasn't enough for me, and I decided to go to that country, and as consequence, I experienced great pleasure from this trip. On the other hand, not everyone can afford to visit any country, and a single available method is watching a special TV channel and reading different magazines and books. Here, human beings have a limited opportunity, but there is an enormous list of different TV programmes on channels or on the Internet, which can also bring benefits, give currently actual information and knowledge. For example, In 2010 I hadn't free money for travelling to Milan. I addressed sources of information about this country, which was checked by a huge number of people and I received a colossal knowledge. To conclude I want to say, that both methods are useful, which can combine.
There are views of human beings, that the
Use only "better" (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
most better
way discover something new about cultures of
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different
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countries
, it's to go and communicate with a local population there, while other
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people
believe reading books and watching travel documentaries is way, which is not worse. This essay will discuss both points of views and express my opinion about this.

Firstly
, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
from myself, that both ways can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
for learning cultures or traditions of
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countries
.
Secondly
, Visiting any
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countries
it's always new impressions.
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it
's the opportunity to touch my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
hands, communicate with local residents, and
as a result
, your horizons and views will be able to broaden and its can stay in your memory for a long time.
For example
, Recently I've returned from my trip to Indonesia. Early I had read enormous bound of books about that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
, tradition, religion, origin
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
tribes.
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it
wasn't
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enough
for me, and I decided to go to that
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country
, and as consequence, I experienced great pleasure from this trip.

On the other hand
, not everyone can afford to visit any
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country
, and a single available method is watching a special TV channel and reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
magazines and books. Here, human beings have a limited opportunity,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
there is an enormous list of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
TV
Possible spelling mistake. 'programmes' is British English.
programmes
on channels or on the Internet, which can
also
bring benefits, give
currently
actual information and knowledge.

For example
, In 2010 I hadn't free money for travelling to Milan. I addressed sources of information about this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
, which was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
checked
by a huge number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and I received
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "colossal knowledge".
a colossal knowledge
.

To conclude
I want to say, that both methods are useful, which can combine.
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IELTS essay Some people think that you can only learn about the cultures of different place by traveling to there. other people think that you can learn just as much about these places from reading books and watching travel documentaries about them.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
284 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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