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Some people think that women should not be allowed work in police force Do you agree or disagree?

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Women are not allowed to served the country, and certain people believed. In this essay I will explain why I should agree to this topic. Woman are not design for this job it required high physical strength, and focus to the job. Male can be suitable for this position, for the reason that, they have more high endurance, strong mental health and can more endure excruciating pain. They are made to protect and serve the country Even though, woman completed their intensive physical training it is not enough compare to the Man. Woman experience monthly period, so that this is also the most problem they can affect their mood, and the way they think compare, to the Man that can give his full attention to the work. To conclude, Women have many disadvantages especially in their body, so this problem can affect their job. On the other hand, Men are design to this work, due to they do not experiencing hormonal changes.
Women are not
allowed
to served
the country, and certain
people
believed. In this essay I will
explain
why I should
agree
to this topic. Woman are not design for this job it required high physical strength, and focus to the job.

Male can be suitable for this position, for the reason that, they have more high endurance, strong mental health and can

more
endure excruciating pain. They
are made
to protect and serve the
country


Even though
, woman completed their intensive physical training it is not
enough
compare to the
Man
. Woman experience monthly period,
so
that this is
also
the most problem they can affect their mood, and the way they
think
compare, to the
Man
that can give his full attention to the work.

To conclude
, Women have
many
disadvantages
especially
in their body,
so
this problem can affect their job.
On the other hand
,
Men
are design to this work, due to they do not
experiencing
hormonal
changes
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that women should not be allowed work in police force

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
162 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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