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It is necessary for parents to attend parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree?

It is necessary for parents to attend parenting training course to bring their children up. XAVN

Raising children is not that uncomplicated. Therefore, the majority of people assume that parenting preparation seminars are essential for bringing children up. To my opinion, such courses should be spread all over the world. On top of that, it should be necessary for new parents to attend these classes. To start with, various aspects of a kid’s growth and development are taught in these classes, namely diet and personal care. For instance, there is a high chance that people, who recently became parents, are not aware of the proper diet of their babies. Consequently, their children may be harmed by inappropriate food. One of the proper decisions for this problem would be joining a parenting training course. These courses would teach them all of the needed knowledge to raise healthy children. In addition, they would answer all of the questions that new parents would have got. Furthermore, becoming an excellent parent demands a lot of responsibility and care. There may happen different tragic cases due to the carelessness of parents. For example, new parents may buy some expired food or wrong medicine inadvertently, as a result, their babies may be hurt by it. They can get poisoned, get indigestion, fall sick, or even die at worst. To avoid such hazardous situations, parenting courses are there. They can deal with the safety and eating habits of a juvenile. All in all, having training courses to guide the upbringing of a child is a boon for society. A trainee can ensure better health and safety of his baby by participating in these workshops. So, to my opinion, new parents should join them.

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