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Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nuturing than aggressive

Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nuturing than aggressive dmL7
Some people depicts that females are predominantly more harmonious than men as their personalities are usually more take care of someone or something than attacking or aggressive. I completely agree with this former view because plethora of reasons behind this view. such as women plays significant role in everyone's life. In one hand, women are prepossessing, caring, intelligent, magnanimous, in the nature as compare to men. Female also plays important role in family, workplace, and also society. for instance; in our contamporary world, "women's are equal to men" in various field. not only particular field overall women have different role in society. In field of work or business they are very intelligent and try to work hard and achieve their goals through their merciful, socialisng bonding with others. they are strong in every situation. for example, is there any problem in company or work place they energetically move forward with confidence and patience and solve the exact issue. they simplifies the obstacles very fastly then men because men's have not much patience, more than that they are very violent nature, forcible, and aggressive in nature. sometimes men chauvinism worsen the situation. women embrace hard times with ease and resolve the stress or pressure. In other hand, females are sensible, lanient, and merciful towards others compare to men. men are weak in exempifying, emotions and care to people around them. for instance, recent survey in South Asia university depicts that men are more stressed and depressed when the time of their failures, and their weak situations. But in case of women they overcome the situation without depressed mood. it is one of the best example. they worsens the critical situations because of their over confidence or other. moreover they are not care people around them. The majority of reasons is time. It shows that most of them have not time managing idea that's truth. It's not an reason. For example; in case of family, the women is the best ever mentor to their children's not men. Because of over work load or other issues. Moreover they have work full time and they act as keysucessof family. To conclude, women are cool like cucumber nuture the world around them. they are very dedicated to others.
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depicts
that females are
predominantly
more harmonious than
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men
as their personalities are
usually
more take care of someone or something than attacking or aggressive. I completely
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agree
with this former view
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because
plethora of reasons behind this view.
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such
as
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women
plays significant role in everyone's life. In one hand,
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women
are prepossessing, caring, intelligent, magnanimous, in the nature as compare to
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men
. Female
also
plays
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important
role in family, workplace, and
also
society.
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for
instance; in our
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contamporary
world,
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"
women's are equal to
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men
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"
in various field.
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not
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only
particular field
overall
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women
have
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different
role in society. In field of
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work
or business they are
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very
intelligent and try to
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hard
and achieve their goals through their merciful,
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socialisng
bonding with others.
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they
are strong in every
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.
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for
example, is there any problem in
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company
or
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work
place they
energetically
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move
forward with confidence and patience and solve the exact issue.
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they
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simplifies
the obstacles
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very
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fastly
then
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men
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men
's have not much patience, more than that they are
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very
violent nature, forcible, and aggressive in nature.
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sometimes
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men
chauvinism worsen the
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situation
.
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women
embrace
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hard
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times
with
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ease
and resolve the
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stress
or pressure. In
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other
hand, females are sensible,
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lanient
, and merciful towards others compare to
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men
.
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men
are weak in
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exempifying
, emotions and care to
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people
around them.
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for
instance, recent survey in South Asia university depicts that
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men
are more
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stressed
and depressed when the
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time
of their failures, and their weak
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situations
.
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in case of
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women
they overcome the
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situation
without depressed mood.
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it
is one of the best example.
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they
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worsens
the critical
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situations
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because
of their over confidence or
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other
.
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moreover
they are not care
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people
around them. The majority of reasons is
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. It
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shows
that most of them have not
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managing
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idea
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an
reason.
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; in case of family, the
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women
is the best ever mentor to their children's not
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men
.
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of over
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work
load or
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issues.
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full
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time and
they act as
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keysucessof
family.
To conclude
,
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women
are cool like cucumber
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nuture
the world around them.
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they
are
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very
dedicated to others.

IELTS essay Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nuturing than aggressive

Essay
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373 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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