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Some people think that we should prefer to drink alcohol others think not . Discuss both views give your opinion.

Some people think that we should prefer to drink alcohol others think not. WEK6a
There is always been debate that opinions regarding the level of Alcohalhas become concern for peoples. On the one hand, other think it is a good for is while, other think it is not. In my point of view that it is good in terms of society if we use it as long as circumspectly. I will discuss my point of view upcoming paragraph along with fully appropriate examples as well as relevant examples. However, It should be noted that I am partially agreed in this statement.
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it is not. In my point of view that it is
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good
in terms of society if we
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use
it as long as
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. I will discuss my point of view upcoming paragraph along with
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appropriate examples
as well
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However
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be noted
that I am
partially
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agreed
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IELTS essay Some people think that we should prefer to drink alcohol others think not.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
87 words
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