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Globalization. What are the positive and negative effects ?

Globalization. What are the positive and negative effects? BYrPX

In my opinion, globalization has both negative and positive impacts on the traditions, cultures of many countries, especially developing countries. To begin with, I will discuss about the positive effects that globalization is bringing to many nations in the world. In my opinion, the culture of every nation is something traditional, unique about that country. That's why it is always well-preserved and developed by the preceding generations. But some customs, some traditions are extremely religious and not suitable for everyone, some even dangerous to our lives. That's when the cultures from the other countries are useful. If we can cooperate the cultures between two countries

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