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Some people think that watching T.V is bad for children in every way other think TV has position effect on children as views and gave opinion.

Some people think that watching T. V is bad for children in every way other think TV has position effect on children as views and gave opinion. aVjo7
It is considered by few masses that viewing TV is inaccurate for little one in every way. Others think TV has constructive effect on youngeters as they develop. This essay will discuss both views in upcoming paragraph. To commence with, watching TV is bad for children health as well as study. To explain it, if they see more TV which effect on toddler eyes. Moreover, they waste more time in front of TV and do not study. For example, In india survey by world health organisation and it proved that 60% children eyes are not well. Thus, watching TV is harmful impact for little one eyes and also study. However, TV has positive effect for children to improve knowledge. To elobrate it, television can be informative and educational only when parents decide which shows they children should watch. Furthermore, if they see informative channel it give knowledge. For instance, as reveals by the famous newspaper 'The Mascow Times' that 70% children clear the general knowledge exam only watch discoveries channel. Hence, viewing TV is good for toddler if they see discoverey channel. To conclusion, Although watching TV is great harmful impact for children health and also study Yet it give knowledge if we watch good channel.
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by few masses that viewing TV is inaccurate for
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one in every way. Others
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youngeters
as they develop. This essay will discuss both views in upcoming paragraph.

To commence with, watching TV is
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bad
for
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children
health
as well
as study. To
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explain
it, if they
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see
more TV which effect on toddler eyes.
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, they waste more time in front of TV and do not study.
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, In
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india
survey by world health
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organisation
and it proved that 60%
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children
eyes are not well.
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, watching TV is harmful impact for
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little
one eyes and
also
study.

However
, TV has
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positive
effect for
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children
to
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improve
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knowledge
. To
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it, television can be informative and educational
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only
when parents decide which
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shows
they
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children
should
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watch
.
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, if they
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see
informative channel it give
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knowledge
.
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, as reveals by the
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Mascow
Times' that 70%
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children
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clear
the general
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knowledge
exam
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only
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watch
discoveries channel.
Hence
, viewing TV is
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good
for toddler if they
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see
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discoverey
channel.

To conclusion, Although watching TV is great harmful impact for
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children
health and
also
study

Yet
it
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give
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knowledge
if we
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watch
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good
channel.
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IELTS essay Some people think that watching T. V is bad for children in every way other think TV has position effect on children as views and gave opinion.

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5 paragraphs
206 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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