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Some people think that to successful you need to get in a university education ,whereas other day that it is not . Discuss both views?

Some people think that to successful you need to get in a university education, whereas other day that it is not. XDOkg

Nobody can deny that education is necessary to fulfill the desires. In this regard, there are certain individuals who contend that teritory education is beneficial to achieve success, whereas other oppose this notion. while both sides have valid viewpoints in their favour. I believe that education is efficacious. Taking into account certain factors it is justified to believe that how university education is lucrative. Firstly, people who study in a university, get specific knowledge from their tutors about how to cope with difficulties. For instance, individuals study in universities have many chances to face success and failure from a lot of projects in the educational institution, and there are professor guiding them in the right way, however, other have to try many things themselves. Hence, way of success perhaps be slower for individuals are deciding not to get in a university.

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education
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. I believe that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
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university
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education
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university
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get
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