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Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Other thinks that it is always better to have a teacher. Which d you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay. v.8

Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Other thinks that it is always better to have a teacher. Which d you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay. v. 8
Learning is the act of acquiring new, or modifying and reinforcing, existing knowledge, skills or preferences and may involve synthesizing different type of information. It does not happen all at once, but builds upon and is shaped by previous knowledge. Learning may be viewed as a process, rather than a collection of factual and procedural knowledge. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one, is whether people learn better by teacher or by themselves. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that without teacher hardly ever can people enhance their knowledge. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons. One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that in today' s hectic world, there are vast majorities of sources, which people rely on for study, but hardly ever can people use those sources to enhance their knowledge. Scientifically speaking, not only do people face difficulties in their life but also may confront trials and tribulations in learning process. In fact, people especially students are bombarded with theoretical lessons and various type of information and they should learn how to put them in practice. Delving further into the issue reveals that crowds of people looking for experienced teacher who can teach useful and paramount materials. Indeed, not only can teachers patronize people avoid misconception but also monitor their progress. As research has shown teachers, play a pivotal role in every society. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic, revealed by a recent social research conducted in our country; show that people who relied on teachers learn more practical. In fact, teachers provided an opportunity for people to learn and enhance their knowledge quickly. Another reason that is equally important if not more is that teachers posses specific characteristics in addition to teaching ability. Broadly speaking, how teachers behave can have positive effects on students. Actually, not only can teacher help people develop their education but also improve every single facet of their life. To put it in other word, people are taught to be responsible. The specific characters of teacher indirectly teaches student to be organized and take the responsibility of what they do. For example, if people have done something wrong, they should accept their mistake and apologize. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has indisputably, nowadays teachers do not have enough information about different courses and may not be useful to rely on. Indeed, myriads of students who have had progress in their education and life use various books, which every things has been wrote in. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale. To wrap it up, people should depend on different sources such as teacher in order to progress. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that teachers are experienced people who can educate students effectively in every single facet of their education. In addition, teacher posses' specific traits that people can admire them. I highly suggest that people should rely on teacher in order to enhance their knowledge. If people do not reverse such a trend, we will soon witness a lagging society with illiterate students.
Learning is the act of acquiring new, or modifying and reinforcing, existing
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knowledge
,
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skills
or preferences and may involve synthesizing
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different
type of information. It does not happen all at once,
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but
builds upon and
is shaped
by previous
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knowledge
. Learning may
be viewed
as a process,
rather
than a collection of factual and procedural
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knowledge
. Bearing this fact in mind a question
that is
a matter of debate a controversial one, is whether
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people
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learn
better by
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teacher
or by themselves. Agreement is
yet
to
be reached
on this issue;
however
, I am
personally
on the belief that without
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teacher
hardly ever can
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people
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enhance
their
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knowledge
. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.

One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that in
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today&
#039; s hectic world, there are vast majorities of sources, which
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people
rely on for study,
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but
hardly ever can
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people
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use
those sources to
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enhance
their
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knowledge
.
Scientifically
speaking, not
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only
do
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people
face difficulties in their life
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but
also
may confront trials and tribulations in learning process. In fact,
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people
especially
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students
are bombarded
with theoretical lessons and various type of
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information and
they should
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learn
how to put them in practice. Delving
further
into the issue reveals that crowds of
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people
looking for experienced
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teacher
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who
can teach useful and paramount materials.
Indeed
, not
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only
can
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teachers
patronize
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people
avoid misconception
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but
also
monitor their progress. As research has shown
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teachers
, play a pivotal role in every society. A noteworthy
refreshingly
intelligible statistic, revealed by
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a recent social research
conducted in our country;
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show
that
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people
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who
relied on
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teachers
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learn
more practical. In fact,
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teachers
provided an opportunity for
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people
to
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learn
and
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enhance
their
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knowledge
quickly
.

Another reason
that is
equally
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important
if not more is that
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teachers
posses specific characteristics
in addition
to teaching ability.
Broadly
speaking, how
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teachers
behave can have
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positive
effects on
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students
. Actually, not
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only
can
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teacher
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help
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people
develop their education
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but
also
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improve
every single facet of their life. To put it in other word,
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people
are taught
to be responsible. The specific characters of
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teacher
indirectly
teaches
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student
to
be organized
and take the responsibility of what they do.
For example
, if
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people
have done something
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wrong
, they should accept their mistake and apologize.
However
, what I alluded to above cannot
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overgeneralized
to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has
indisputably
, nowadays
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teachers
do not have
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enough
information about
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different
courses and may not be useful to rely on.
Indeed
, myriads of
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students
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who
have had progress in their education and life
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use
various books, which every
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things
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has
been
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wrote
in.
Nevertheless
, it does not
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make
those preceding benefits pale.

To wrap it up,
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people
should depend on
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different
sources such as
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teacher
in order to progress. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one
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soon
realize that
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teachers
are experienced
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people
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who
can educate
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students
effectively
in every single facet of their education.
In addition
,
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teacher
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posses&
#039; specific traits that
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people
can admire them. I
highly
suggest that
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people
should rely on
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teacher
in order to
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enhance
their
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knowledge
. If
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people
do not reverse such a trend, we will
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soon
witness a lagging society with illiterate
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students
.
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59Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Other thinks that it is always better to have a teacher. Which d you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay. v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
544 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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